初中英语作文:给朋友的一封信,中英双语对照自然,体现跨文化表达意识,时间线索清晰(7点集合→8点抵达→爬山→午餐→观鸟→俯瞰),节奏明快。

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dearjim,
亲爱的吉姆,
lastsunday my classmates and i went to _iangshan park.
上周日我和我的同学去了香山公园。
wemet at 7 oclock at the school gate. the weather in beijing that day was great.at around 8 oclock, we arrived at _iangshan park. there is a high tree on thebottom of the hill. we had a party and played games under the tree. then weclimbed to the top of _iangshan mountain. it was not very difficult for us to doit. ne_t, we had lunch at the top of the hill. it was delicious. after lunch, wesaw some birds. they were friendly. and we saw a whole picture of beijing. whata beautiful city! i said. at that moment, we all felt so proud. i live inbeijing now. the 2026 olympic games was held here.
我们七点在校门口集合。那天北京的天气很好。八点左右,我们就抵达香山公园。在山脚下有一棵高高的树。我们在树下开了一个聚会,玩游戏。然后我们爬上香山的山顶。对我们来说并不是很难。接下来,我们在山顶上吃午饭。很美味。午饭后,我们看见了一些鸟。它们很友好。我们看到了北京的全貌。”真是一个美丽的城市!”我说道。在那一刻,我们都感到非常的骄傲。我现在住在北京。2026届奥运会将在这里举行。
ihope you can visit to beijing in the future and i am sure you’ll like here.
希望将来你可以来参观北京,我肯定你一定会喜欢的。
bestwishes.
的祝福 sincerely yours,
li ming
李明

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