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优秀初中英语作文：buy a mobile phone，中英双语自然对照，体现真实语言学习情境，以“屏幕变白”为细节切入点，观察具体、生活气息浓厚。
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the screen of my father‘s mobile telephone is broken. when you open the mobile telephone， the screen is always white with light. you can‘t see from the screen. and my father is a businessman. he needed a new one. so my father and i went to the electrical appliance shop. there are many new kinds of mobile telephones. at first, my father chose a sumsung one. but all the telephones have sold out. finally, my father chose a motorola one.
我爸爸的手机屏幕坏了，打开手机，屏幕一是白茫茫的一片，什么也看不到。我爸爸是做生意的，有很多电话。他得买一台新新手机。于是我和爸爸去了电器店。店里有许多新出的手机。起初，爸爸选择了一台三星，但是这个型号的都卖完了。最后，爸爸选择了摩托罗拉。
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