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第29-30期

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高中新概念英语作文模板:第29-30期,称谓与落款格式规范,体现书信文体意识,情感表达自然真实,

第29-30期

作文范文

主题: 成长、学习、信任、沟通、支持

第29期

a letter for help

dear uncle,

how are you?

ne_t week an english speaking contest will be held in the city. a classmate of mine and i will take part in it on behalf of my school. i am e_cited but also mervous, because it is a good chance to improve my english. but i have no e_perience. although i have been preparing for the contest, i am still not confident. as an e_pert in english, what would you advise me to prepare for the contest?

i plan to pay a visit to you this saturday morning. i wonder whether you will be free then. if not, could you tell me the time that is convenient for you? i am eager to get your instruction. i will appreciate any of your help.

your niece,

yang mei

精选读者点评

这封信格式挺规范,称呼、落款都对!话说回来“ne_t”“e_cited”这些单词缺字母,是打字漏了还是拼写还不熟?下次写完自己读一遍,边读边检查,小漏洞就藏不住啦~

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:应用文、书信

适合年级:初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

excited、nervous、good、confident、convenient、eager

【好词好句】

1. "i am excited but also nervous, because it is a good chance to improve my english."

2. "i wonder whether you will be free then."

3. "i am eager to get your instruction."

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "ne_t"应为"net"

• "mervous"应为"nervous"

• "e_perience"应为"experience"

• "e_pert"应为"expert"

• "saturday"应为"saturday"

【写作亮点】

✓ 称谓与落款格式规范,体现书信文体意识

✓ 情感表达自然真实,"excited but also nervous"准确呈现心理状态

✓ 请求帮助的措辞得体,"i wonder whether..."“could you...”体现礼貌与分寸

✓ 时间安排与事由结合紧密,逻辑清晰

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