第56-57期

作文类型：记叙文、抒情散文

适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级

【形容词】

clean、quiet、soft、special、good、later、family

【好词好句】

1. “they like to play soft music.”

2. “this is an appointment that they make for me.”

3. “hearing their reason, i love the name of that restaurant.”

【修辞手法】

比喻：将“appointment”一词双关化，既指餐厅名称，又喻指家人间的情感约定，赋予寻常词汇以温情厚度

【文字校对】

• "appointment restaurant"应为"appointment restaurant"

• "in past few years"应为"in the past few years"

• "go the appointment restaurant"应为"go to the appointment restaurant"

• "i don’t think"应为"i don’t think"

• "as a child, i don’t think..."主语时态与上下文不一致，宜改为"as a child, i didn’t think..."

【写作亮点】

✓ 巧用“appointment”一词的多重含义，实现语言凝练与情感升华的统一

✓ 以小见大，从一家餐厅名称切入，自然引出家庭陪伴的深层主题

✓ 叙事视角由懵懂孩童渐进至理解体悟，情感发展脉络清晰自然

✓ 结尾收束轻巧而余味绵长，不直说亲情，却处处浸润亲情