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小学生英语作文：my sister，人物外貌描写层次清晰，按“脸—眼—鼻—发”顺序展开，用具体事例支撑性格特点，如“help others”与“many good friends”自然呼应。
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亲情、成长、才艺、善良、陪伴
i have a sister. her name is hu dan. she is twenty years. she is a high school student.
she has a round face, two big .bright eyes and a small nose.her hair is long. her favourite colour is blue. her favourite sport istennis. in spring, she often plays tennis with me.
she is good at drawing. her drawings are very nice. i like watching her draw pictures.
she is kind and friendly. she is always ready to help others.so she has many good friends.
this is my sister. i like her very much.
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