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the u.s.

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小学生优秀英语作文:the u.s.,语句简明,符合初级英语表达习惯。

the u.s.

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主题: 国家介绍、地理方位、著名地标、国旗象征

this is the u.s. this is a map of the u.s., the u.s. is east of china and south of canada.the capital city of the u.s. is washing,d.c. the flag of the u.s. has stars and stripes。 it is red, white, and blue. the stars are white, the stripes are red and white. this is the white house, the president of the u.s. lives in the white house. the white house is very famous. this the statue of liberty in the new york, it is very famous, too!

(让我来介绍一下美国吧)

精选读者点评

标点乱跑啦!“washing,d.c.”中间不能加逗号,“new york”前面少了个冠词,“this the statue”漏了of,这些小窟窿,补上就精神多了。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:说明文、地理介绍类

【成语使用】

【形容词】

east、south、famous、red、white、blue

【好词好句】

1. the u.s. is east of china and south of canada.

2. the flag of the u.s. has stars and stripes.

3. the white house is very famous.

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "washing,d.c."应为"washington, d.c."

• "this the statue"应为"this is the statue"

• "in the new york"应为"in new york"

【写作亮点】

✓ 语句简明,符合初级英语表达习惯

✓ 空间方位描述清晰(east of china, south of canada)

✓ 围绕核心地标展开介绍,结构自然有序

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