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在周未的英语作文

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关于在周未的英语作文,以时间轴清晰展开周末活动,脉络自然流畅,多次运用第一人称与读者互动,如“how about you?”“can you tell me?”,增强亲切感。

在周未的英语作文

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主题: 成长、陪伴、快乐、责任、生活、热爱

my weekend 我的周末

i think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.

on saturday morning, i am going to the bookstore. i’m going to buy some story-books and a chinese-english and english-chinese dictionary. i like reading story-books. i find them very interesting. then i am going home. my home is near the bookstore. so i am going by bike. i like riding my bike. in the evening, i am going to play piano. playing piano is my hobby.

on sunday morning, i am going to do my homework. now i am in grade si_. i want to enter a good middle school ne_t year. so i must study hard. in the afternoon, i am going shopping with my parents and my little brother. my mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. i love going shopping. i think all of the girls like going shopping. am i right.

on sunday evening, i am going back to school by school bus. i love my weekend, how about you? tell me something about your weekend.

last weekend

i had a happy weekend last week.

on saturday morning, i watched tv and helped my mother wash clothes. in the afternoon, i cleaned three bedrooms in my house-- mine, my parents’ and my brother’s.

on sunday, i played football in the park. then i went to my grandparents’ house. grandpa played the piano! the whole family was so happy. later, we wanted to swim. but it was too cold.

this was last weekend.

my happy weekend

ok, let me tell you something about my weekend.

i am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. so i do my homework on saturday morning. in the afternoon, i am going to do housework with my mother. because i am a good girl, i am helpful at home. on sunday morning, i am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. in the afternoon, we are going to the park together. because there is a kite show. and my grandparents likes making kites. i think, we can see many beautiful kites there. and we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too. then, we are going to fly the new kites, that’s fun. in the evening, we are going to have a big dinner. we are going to have fish for dinner. because my grandparents likes eating fish. and my grandma cooks fish well. after dinner, we are going to watch tv together. we are going to be very happy.

this is my happy weekend. i like my weekend very much. what about your weekend? can you tell me?

精选读者点评

这个“last weekend”真自然洗衣服、扫三间房、爷爷弹琴、全家想游泳又嫌冷……全是画面,连冷空气都冒出来了。比后面两个“my weekend”着实多了。下次试试把“i am going to”换成点过去时吧!

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、应用文、英语习作

适合年级:小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

busy、interesting、happy、good、beautiful、cold、big、helpful

【好词好句】

1. i like reading story-books. i find them very interesting.

2. the whole family was so happy.

3. because there is a kite show.

4. we are going to be very happy.

【修辞手法】

排比:多处使用“i am going to…”“we are going to…”结构,形成节奏鲜明的行动罗列

【文字校对】

• "si_"应为"six"

• "ne_t"应为"next"

• "likes"(复数主语后)应为"like"(两处:my grandparents likes → my grandparents like)

• "am i right."句末标点应为"?"

【写作亮点】

✓ 以时间轴清晰展开周末活动,脉络自然流畅

✓ 多次运用第一人称与读者互动,如“how about you?”“can you tell me?”,增强亲切感

✓ 动词短语丰富多样,如“watch tv”“clean bedrooms”“fly kites”“cook fish”,生活气息浓郁

✓ 通过具体细节传递情感,如“grandpa played the piano!”“my grandma cooks fish well”,真实可感

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