简单英语小作文,中英双语对照结构清晰,体现初步跨语言表达意识,以“老师”为情感锚点,聚焦具体人物而非泛泛而谈。

✎作文范文
i am li kai.i was bron in 1995,that is to say ,i am eleven years old this year.i am a pupil from class3 ,grade 6 in the primary school.myfavourite persons are teachers.because they teach us knowledge.teachers let us understand the world.
我是李凯。我出生在1995,也就是说,我今年十一岁。我来自三班的学生,在小学6年级。我最喜欢的人是老师。因为他们教给我们知识的老师让我们了解世界。

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