my dream英语作文,主题清晰,以“梦想”为线索贯穿始终,结构完整,时态运用基本准确,以be going to表将来意图,体现语言意识。

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my dream
everyone has his dream. my dream is to be a famous journalist in the future. when i grow up, im going to be a journalist. ne_t year, im going to write articles for magazines and newspapers. im going to a university in beijing after senior school. maybe im going to find a part-time job and save some money. ne_t, im going to work for a tv station as a journalist. then im going to travel all over the world. what is your dream in the future? would you like to tell me ?
翻译:
人人都有梦想。我的梦想是在将来做一名的记者。当我长大的时候,我将做一个记者。明年,我将给杂志和报纸写一些文章。中学毕业后,我将去北京的某所大学上学。或许我将找一份兼职工作来积攒些钱。下一步,我将作为记者为电视台工作。然后我将周游世界各地。你将来的梦想是什么?你愿意告诉我吗?

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