国庆节英语作文:国庆节快乐,以儿童视角真实记录假期行程,充满生活气息,时间线索清晰,从国庆节起始到10月5日返程,结构自然完整。

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国庆节的时候,我、妈妈、潘露瑶、和孙义超去金华玩。我们去了梦幻谷,还去了地下长河,去了很多很多地方,那里可好玩了,直到10月5日,我们才依依不舍的回家,那天晚上到家都已经10点了。我买了很多礼物,有潘露瑶、孙义超、爸爸、哥哥还有妈妈。10月1日是祖国妈妈的生日,祝祖国妈妈生日快乐!
on national day, i, mother, pan luyao, and sun yichao to play in jinhua. we went to dream valley, also went to the underground river, to a lot of places, there can be a lot of fun, until october 5th, we go home to be reluctant to part, that night at home have 10 points. i bought a lot of gifts, pan luyao, sun yichao, father, brother and mother. october 1st is mothers birthday, i wish the motherland mother happy birthday!

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