venice

200字
主题:城市特色、地理风貌、水上交通、异域风情

there is a large city in italy. it is called venice. it is a beautiful city, but it is different from other cities in the world.

there are no wide streets in the city, but there are over 170 canals, because the city is built on many small islands. when people want to go out, they take a boat.

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在意大利有一座大城市,它叫威尼斯。这是一座美丽的城市,可是它与世界上别的城市不同。

这个城市里没有宽阔的街道,可是有170多条运河,因为这座城市是建在许多小岛上。当人们外出时,他们乘船。

精选读者点评

venice?拼写全小写了哦~还有,开头字母得大写呀!

the u.s.

200字
主题:国家介绍、地理方位、著名地标、国旗象征

this is the u.s. this is a map of the u.s., the u.s. is east of china and south of canada.the capital city of the u.s. is washing,d.c. the flag of the u.s. has stars and stripes。 it is red, white, and blue. the stars are white, the stripes are red and white. this is the white house, the president of the u.s. lives in the white house. the white house is very famous. this the statue of liberty in the new york, it is very famous, too!

(让我来介绍一下美国吧)

精选读者点评

标点乱跑啦!“washing,d.c.”中间不能加逗号,“new york”前面少了个冠词,“this the statue”漏了of,这些小窟窿,补上就精神多了。

china

200字
主题:祖国、首都、地标、文化、爱国、地理

our country is china. it is where we live.

look! this is a map of china . the u.s is east of china.the u.k. is west and a little north of china,and australia is south and east of china. china has many people. it has thirteen hundred million people. the capital city of china is beijing.beijing is very great and famous. it has tian’anmen square,the palace museum,the great wall and summer palace.they are all very famous. the flag of china is red. there are five yellow stars in it.

what a great country!

精选读者点评

地图方位写得挺清楚,但“u.s”“u.k.”要大写哦,标点也别漏了小数点~