my father

500字
主题:亲情、热爱、成长、观察、理解、生活

my father is a fan, when start the game, my dad arrive on time. not because of special thing, dad won be late for one minute.

i remember one day my mother go to work in the morning, daddy also go to work. as far as im a person at home to play, i think: longer fifteen minutes film began. turn on the tv, i saw on tv write number is 16. not play a cartoon, i just want to transferred to the stage, i think electricity see 16 on the stage in the game. play slice, have what good-looking of, dad actually feel good-looking. after half an hour, i really can wait. i looked at it and feel the same, for a moment, i feel very not good-looking, jump to the 14 on the stage. as a result, the animation finished, if early know cartoons had almost finished, i would have brought in on time. soon, the mother came back and took my made a delicious. the ne_t animation need to start, i turn on the television. yeah, began. but, dad came back again, i just watched for a while, the tv remote control was taken from dad, dad to 16 on the stage, and began to look at his beautiful game. i don know, why the game doesn look good, father is how so love? for a moment, only heard dad shouted: playing well, playing well. 11 o clock in the evening, my father still watch the game, its hard to see not bottom go to, i say: you don watch any more, dad. for a while, the game ended, my father go to bed.

this is my father, a father love football.

精选读者点评

爸爸看球入迷的样子,真带劲“跳到14台”“遥控被抢走”,小手一指就看见画面了,童趣扑面。

倔强的爷爷

200字
主题:亲情、代际、性格、生活趣事、家庭温情

倔强的爷爷

张长皓

我的爷爷已经六十多岁了,可他还强得像头牛。就连奶奶也称他为“老强牛”。

每周末的晚上,我们都要到爷爷家。我爱看“周末娱乐城”、“娱乐时光”这些节目,而爷爷专门爱看京剧节目。我一看见咿咿呀呀的节目,就马上换台。

有一次,我一回家就看我爱看的节目,爷爷就换了节目,我说看“周末娱乐城”,爷爷马上反对并把台换了。还不停地说好看。过了一会儿,奶奶说:“就让孩子看吧!”爷爷气呼呼地躺下了。

这就是我的倔强爷爷。

精选读者点评

爷爷“气呼呼地躺下了”这句节奏真好像看见他背过身去、手还攥着遥控器的样子。后半段节奏也顺,但“老强牛”和“倔强”重复了,留一个就够了。

五一见闻

400字
主题:节日见闻、媒体变迁、城市生活、家庭对话、时代印记

今天是五月一日,我照例打开电视机,发现宁波一台正在播《宁波晨报》这个新闻栏目。咦,我以前怎么没看见过,我奇怪地问外公,外公笑着对我说:“毛毛,这是宁波电视台的一次全新改版,原有的宁波电视台一套,二套节目将保留为四个频道,四个频道统一用宁波电视台的台名。”外公顿了顿,接着说:“其中第一套节目为新闻综合频道,该频道以宁波地方新闻和综合新闻为主,同时转播中央电视台《新闻联播》,届时还有《宁波晨报》、《午间新闻网》等新的栏目出现;第二套节目是经济生活频道,这是一个以提供服务为主的频道,在股市行情、衣食住行等方面,成为老百姓生活不可缺少的好帮手.第三套节目原是宁波有线一台,现在是都市文体频道,这个频道将体现宁波都市文化的特征;而第四套节目是影视频道,电影、电视剧的播出将是这个频道的主要内容。”听了外公的话,我恍然大悟。于是我调到了13频道,果然,原来的三角型有线台台标不见了,取而代之的是宁波三台。

精选读者点评

这作文写的是“五一见闻”,可通篇没见你劳动一下,也没见别人劳动,连扫地的阿姨、修路的工人、包饺子的妈妈都没露脸。标题和内容像坐了两趟车,到站都不一样。