初一写人作文:my english friend，人物外貌描写层次清晰，从身高、体型到发色、五官有序展开，兴趣爱好呈现多维立体感，兼顾体育与艺术两大领域。
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my english friend name is fan junran.she’s twelve years old. she is tall, but not plump. she has black long hair, two big eyes and a lovely mouth. she often tells me lots of the funny things
luky has many hobbies. she likes sports very much. she can play basketball. she plays very well. she is good at the high jump, long-distance running and swimming.
she is very health, right? and luky likes art. she likes singing, dancing and playing the electronic organ. she dances very well.
she likes hip-hop so much. she is so cool when she dances hip-hop.
we are good friends now. i’m so happy to meet her. she is a very breeziness girl. do you want to be friends with her now?
初一:肖磊
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