初中英语作文范文-我的爸爸my father,中英双语自然穿插,体现跨文化表达意识,意象选择独特,“红铁烙印”将抽象情感具象化,富有视觉张力。

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dear dad,
all these years, you never said anything to me, but i feel clearly the genuineness of your love for me from my monthly living e_penses that you send . your love is so silent as the mountains. you put your love to me bit by bit, but every month when i went to the bank e_tracted, your love is like red iron-branded which branded into my soul, let me feel an_ious.
your heart has always been my refuge bays, in your arms i can take off past where strong mask. i was a crying boy, and my tears just flow to you to see.take care of yourslef dad,ill study hard here at school.
your little son ,jacky
亲爱的爸爸,
这些年来,你从来没有对我说什么,但我清晰地感受到真实的你对我的爱从我每月的生活费,你送。你的爱像山那样的沉默。你把你的爱给我的点点滴滴,但每个月当我去银行提取,你的爱像红铁烙,烙进我的灵魂,让我感到焦虑。
你的心一直是我的避难的港湾,在你的怀里我可以把过去的“强大”的面具。我是一个正在哭的男孩,我的眼泪就流给你看。照顾自己的爸爸,我会努力学习,在学校。
你的小儿子,杰克

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