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初中简单英语作文-去动物园

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初中简单英语作文-去动物园,双语对照自然清晰,中英文内容基本一致,时间线索明确,按起床、出发、抵达、游览、返程顺序展开。

初中简单英语作文-去动物园

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主题: 亲子时光、快乐体验、自然观察、童年记忆

today was sunday. my parents were free, too. i got up at 7oclock, because my families planed to go to the zoo. after the breakfast, i took the camera and went to the station together with my parents. it was already 9oclock when we arrived at the zoo. there were so many monkeys, tigers, lions, wolves and other animals in the zoo. we took many photos in the zoo with the animals. i will show these photos in my class after they were printed. the time passed so fast, we left the zoo at 1oclock pm. i was so happy today. now i feel very tired and i will go to bed early tonight.

今天是星期天,我父母也有空。我7点起床,因为我们全家打算去动物园。吃完早餐,我带上相机和父母一起去车站。我们到达动物园的时候已经9点了。动物园里有很多猴子,老虎,狮子,狼和其他动物。在那里,我们和动物拍了很多相片。等这些相片洗出来后,我会在班上给大家看。时间过得很快,下午一点我们就离开了动物园。今天我很开心。现在我觉得有点累,今天晚上我会早睡。

精选读者点评

时态乱了!“planed”是啥?“were printed”也别扭,照片是洗出来,不是被印出来呀~再读两遍,圈出所有动词,看看是不是都站对队了呀!

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、双语作文

适合年级:小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级

【成语使用】

时间过得很快

【形容词】

很多、开心、 tired、early、fast

【好词好句】

1. there were so many monkeys, tigers, lions, wolves and other animals in the zoo.

2. i took the camera and went to the station together with my parents.

3. the time passed so fast, we left the zoo at 1oclock pm.

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "7oclock"应为"7 o'clock"

• "families planed"应为"family planned"

• "9oclock"应为"9 o'clock"

• "1oclock pm"应为"1 o'clock p.m."

• "tired"应为"tired"

【写作亮点】

✓ 双语对照自然清晰,中英文内容基本一致

✓ 时间线索明确,按起床、出发、抵达、游览、返程顺序展开

✓ 动物列举具体,体现观察细致

✓ 情感表达真实朴素,如“i was so happy today”“now i feel very tired”

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