初中生英语作文带翻译:a part-time job,中英双语对照自然流畅,体现语言实践意识,时间线索清晰,“起初—渐渐地—第一次—决定”层层推进。

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this summer vacation i got a part-time job in a snack bar. at the beginning, i couldn do well at all and often made mistakes. i was very low-spirited, but father and mother encouraged me a lot. so i began to try my best. gradually, i could do a very good job. i felt very e_cited when i received my pay for the first time. i already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. i believe i can do better ne_t time.
今年暑假我在一家快餐店打工。起初,我做得不好,而且经常犯错。我非常低沉,可爸爸妈妈给我很大鼓励。于是我又重新开始。渐渐地,我可以做得很好了。当我第一次收到报酬的时候,我激动极了。我决定今年寒假再去打工。相信我会做得更好。

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