初中英语作文:my study trip to dunman high s,以时间线索清晰展开行程,结构自然流畅,通过对比(“my english was very poor”)体现真实成长意识。

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my study trip to dunman high school
in july, i was on a study trip to dunman high school. dunman high school is in singapore. it is dongzhou middle school’s sister school. it is a very good school. it is large and there are flowers and trees everywhere. the school looks very nice. there are many teachers and students in the school. they are all friendly and helpful. the students always have classes in english e_cept chinese lessons. they speak english very well, too.
when i was in singapore, i had classes with them, and i was glad to make friends with them. i found my english was very poor, i must study english harder than before. i hope i can talk with my singapore friends in english some day.

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