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身边的科学二年级

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英语作文:身边的科学二年级,双语对照结构自然嵌入,体现学科融合意识,以亲身经历切入科学原理,真实感强。

身边的科学二年级

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主题: 实践出真知、现象与本质、生活即课堂、好奇驱动学习

there are many scientific phenomena around us. we can always find them if we pay attention to observation. one summer afternoon, my mouth was dry with heat, and i thought, if only i had a glass of ice water, there should be water in the kitchen. walking into the kitchen, i could not anticipate that there was a pot of water on the table. i was so happy that i poured the water into the cup immediately. a cup of hot air came out of the cup. it turned out to be boiling water. how can we make the boiling water cool down quickly? so i put the water in the refrigerator, and after a few seconds, i heard a ang and the water trickled out along the crack in the refrigerator. i was startled and quickly opened the fridge door. i suddenly froze. how could a good cup break? through consulting the information, i know the cause of the cup e_plosion, is the principle of hot e_pansion and cold contraction: because the cup filled with boiling water makes the cup internal heating e_pansion, the temperature in the refrigerator and the cup e_ternal cold contraction, so that the cup internal e_pansion, e_ternal or cold, delayed e_pansion, the cup e_ploded. from this, i understand a truth: science is everywhere, as long as we observe carefully, we can find many things we do not know through our own efforts. 身边的科学

我们身边有许多科学现象,平时只要留心观察,就一定能发现它们。

在一个夏天的中午,我热得口干舌燥,心想:”要是有杯冰水喝就好了,厨房里应该有水。“走进厨房,果然不出我所料,桌子上放着满满一壶水。我高兴极了,马上把水倒进杯子。一股热气冒出杯口,原来,这是壶开水!怎样才能让开水迅速凉下来呢?于是我把水放进了冰箱,过了几秒钟,只听”砰“地一声,水沿着冰箱缝徐徐流出。我吓了一大跳,迅速打开冰箱门,我顿时愣住了,好好的杯子怎么会破呢?通过查阅资料,我知道了杯子爆炸的原因,是热胀冷缩的原理:因为杯子里装的开水使杯子内部受热膨胀,冰箱里的温度又使杯子外部受冷收缩,就这样,杯子内部不断膨胀,外部还是凉的,迟迟不膨胀,杯子就爆了。

从这件事中,我明白了一个道理:科学无处不在,只要我们认真观察,就能通过我们自己的努力发现许多我们许多不知道的东西。

精选读者点评

这事儿真鲜活热得冒汗、倒水、砰一声炸了……画面全在眼前蹦。尤其“我顿时愣住了”这句,比啥描写都管用。客观来说后半段原理说明太密,喘可气来,试试把“热胀冷缩”拆成两句话,让读者也跟着你缓一缓吧!

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、说明文、科普小品

【成语使用】

口干舌燥、热胀冷缩、不出所料

【形容词】

干燥、滚烫、迅速、徐徐、认真、满满

【好词好句】

1. 一股热气冒出杯口,原来,这是壶开水!

2. 我吓了一大跳,迅速打开冰箱门,我顿时愣住了,好好的杯子怎么会破呢?

3. 科学无处不在,只要我们认真观察,就能通过我们自己的努力发现许多我们许多不知道的东西。

【修辞手法】

比喻:将开水倒入杯中后“一股热气冒出杯口”,以具象动态呈现温度差异,增强画面感

引用:“科学无处不在”化用常见科普表达,体现生活哲理

排比:“内部受热膨胀……外部受冷收缩……内部不断膨胀,外部还是凉的”,以对比性重复强化原理逻辑

【文字校对】

• "e_plosion"应为"explosion"

• "e_pansion"应为"expansion"

• "e_ternal"应为"external"

• "delayed e_pansion"应为"delayed expansion"

• "身 边 的 科 学"中空格多余,应为"身边的科学"

• "我们许多不知道的东西"语序不当,应为"我们不知道的许多东西"

【写作亮点】

✓ 双语对照结构自然嵌入,体现学科融合意识

✓ 以亲身经历切入科学原理,真实感强

✓ 中英文段落形成互文,中文详述过程,英文勾勒框架

✓ 热胀冷缩原理阐释由现象到本质,层层递进

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