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四年级英语作文-一个美妙的梦

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四年级英语作文-一个美妙的梦,梦境构思富有童趣,水果长在路边树上的设定充满想象力,中英双语对照自然呈现,体现语言学习的真实情境。

四年级英语作文-一个美妙的梦

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主题: 想象、成长、亲情、真实与虚幻、童心、收获

last night, i had a wonderful dream. in the dream, i rode my bike in a country road. on the both sides of the road, there are many trees. and these trees all have different fruits, apples, pears, oranges, bananas and many other fruits. the fruits are ripe. i can get them on the bike. they are delicious. i eat many fruits and i am full. and then, i go back home. i tell the story to my mother, but she doesn’t believe me. then, i woke up.

昨天晚上我做了一个美妙的梦。梦里我骑着自行车在乡间的小路上。路的两边种满了树,这些树上有不同的水果,有苹果、梨、橘子、香蕉和很多其他水果。果子成熟了,我可以站在自行车上摘水果。水果很美味,我吃了很多水果都饱了然后就回家了。我把故事告诉妈妈,但是她不相信我,然后我就醒了。

精选读者点评

梦里摘果子这想法透着灵气!树上挂满苹果梨橘子香蕉,像童话超市,就是“on the both sides”得改“on both sides”哦,小错别漏掉~

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、想象作文

【成语使用】

【形容词】

美妙、乡间、不同、成熟、美味

【好词好句】

1. last night, i had a wonderful dream.

2. on the both sides of the road, there are many trees.

3. the fruits are ripe. i can get them on the bike.

4. 昨天晚上我做了一个美妙的梦。

【修辞手法】

比喻:将乡间道路两旁挂满果实的树比作天然果园,暗含丰饶与童话感

【文字校对】

• "on the both sides"应为"on both sides"

• "i can get them on the bike"应为"i can pick them from the bike"

• "i eat many fruits and i am full. and then, i go back home."语序生硬,宜合并为"i ate so many fruits that i felt full, then rode home."

【写作亮点】

✓ 梦境构思富有童趣,水果长在路边树上的设定充满想象力

✓ 中英双语对照自然呈现,体现语言学习的真实情境

✓ 时间线索清晰,“昨晚做梦—梦中经历—醒来讲述”结构完整

✓ 结尾“妈妈不相信我”留下余味,呼应儿童心理的真实质感

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