导语
小学五年级优秀作文，时间线索清晰，以“saturday morning—afternoon—evening”“sunday morning—afternoon—night”自然推进，人物情感真实可感，如“she was happy”简洁传递亲子互动的温暖。
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童年生活、日常节奏、亲情陪伴、成长点滴
小学五年级优秀作文
hi,boys and girls,do you want to know my last weekend? let me tell you.
on saturday morning,i got up at 10:00,then i ate breakfast,i did my homework.in the afternoon,i had to go to school to study.in the evering,i watched tv and played with my little dog. it’s white and lovely.
on sunday morning, i got up early and went to the school to study. after school, i helped my mother to do housework, she was happy. in the afternoon, i played a ball with my friends and washed my clothes. at night, i went to bed at 9:00.
this is my last weekend.what a busy one!
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