关于建军节的小学生英语作文,观察细致,从道路、宿舍到训练场,空间转换自然有序,细节生动,“豆腐块”式被子等典型意象富有画面感。

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on august 1st, on the day of the armys day, i went with the scouts to visit my uncle. as soon as we got off the bus, we first saw a clean road with thick towering trees on both sides.
along the path we first visited their dormitory, and as soon as we entered, we saw a neat and clean bed, especially a neatly folded quilt, like a square of bean curd.
then we went to the lecture theatre.
there he watched a movie, which was named the soldiers laurel. the peoples liberation army uncles also performed the sketch, the scout troop also performed the flag language.
finally, in the playground, the peoples liberation armys uncle let us witness the power of grappling.
every movement was so neat and strong that all the scouts could not help clapping their hands.
i think these skills must have been inseparable from the hard work of peace. todays visit, let me have a further understanding of military personnel.
in the future, i will learn the spirit of this diligence of the pla uncles, and i will not shrink from difficulties. only in this way can we make continuous progress and succeed.

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