小学生优秀英语作文:my weekend,时态运用基本准确,以be going to结构贯穿全文,体现未来计划主题,段落层次清晰,按时间顺序(saturday/sunday)组织内容,逻辑自然。

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my weekend
hi,this is yang hai lin.im going to have a busy weekend!on saturday,im going to the magazine by bike.im going to buy a post card and dictionary.then,im going to read the new books.on sunday, im going to the supermaker with my friend.
we e going after lunch.then,in the evening,im going to visit my aunt.we are going to watch tv together.that will be fun!
what about you?what are you going to do on the weekend?

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