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毕业后干什么

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12月英语六级满分作文精讲:毕业后干什么,观点清晰,以“my choice”为锚点统摄全文,逻辑主线鲜明,语言地道,灵活运用upon doing、the more...the more...等高阶句式。

毕业后干什么

作文范文

主题: 成长抉择、终身学习、世界眼光、自我实现、时代青年

大家可以注意复习一些英语六级作文精讲,考试的时候可以帮助自己提高作文水平,预祝同学们高分通过考试。

what i choose to do upon graduation

毕业后干什么

upon graduating from the university, every student is faced with a big, practical problem, thatis, to make a choice for his/her future career. however, the choice varies from pe rson to person. some students want to find jobs in joint ventures, desiring to earn more money. many arepreparing for entering the gr aduate school, so they work hard to pass the entrancee_amination. also, there are unambitious ones who are indifferent to the choice of career andthink that any kind of job will satisfy their desire. only a small number of students are at a losswhat to choose. as to me, i am determined to further my studies abroad and i am fullysupported by my parents.

i have many reasons for my choice. t he fundamental one is that in a developed country i canenrich my mind with most advanced profes sional knowledge in my speciality. i believe thatthe more i learn, the better equipped i will be with modern knowledge, and the more probablyi will succeed in my pursuit. some people suggest that i work while studying. well, that mightbe a good idea. however, i would like to see more of the world when i am young, and i thinkthree or four years study will undoubtedly benefit my whole life. in addition, i am sure that iwill certainly have more opportunities to get a satisfactory job in future with the profoundknowledge i learn in graduate school abroad.

cet6六级作文结构分析

· faced with a choice of futur e career

_ find jobs in joint ventur es

_ enter graduate school

_ indiffer ent attitude

_ at a loss wha t to choose

_ my choice

· reasons for my choice

_ learn advanced professional knowledge

_ see mor e of the wor ld

_ mor e opportunities in future

cet6六级作文内容分析:

本文是议论文, 文中第一段描述了大学生毕业之际面临对未来的选择, 列举数种意向作为背景, 引出主题“ 我的抉择”, 例证真实, 论点明确, 思路严谨。学习本文应多临摹其思路以及语言表达。

cet6六级作文万能句型:

upon graduating from... 毕业之际

be faced with 面临

varies from pe rson to person 因人而异

joint venture 合资企业

graduate school 研究生院

unambitious a. 无雄心壮志的

indifferent to 无所谓, 不经意

satisfy ones desire 满足愿望

at a loss what to choose 无所适从

as to 至于

further my studies 深造

enrich v. 使丰富

be equipped with... 以……装备

pursuit n. 追求

see more of the world 多了解世界

名师点评

“出国深造”写得像订了张机票,有目标、有盘算、连爸妈支持都带上了!略显第三段那句“see more of the world”翻成“多了解世界”有点平,要是换成“睁眼看世界”“撞见不一样的活法”,是不是更激情澎湃呢!

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:议论文、英语应用文

适合年级:高中三年级

【成语使用】

无所适从、因人而异

【形容词】

advanced、modern、satisfactory、profound、unambitious、indifferent

【好词好句】

1. upon graduating from the university, every student is faced with a big, practical problem, that is, to make a choice for his/her future career.

2. the more i learn, the better equipped i will be with modern knowledge, and the more probably i will succeed in my pursuit.

3. i would like to see more of the world when i am young, and i think three or four years’ study will undoubtedly benefit my whole life.

【修辞手法】

比喻:将知识储备比作“装备”(be equipped with modern knowledge),形象体现知识对人的塑造与支撑作用

排比:文中“learn advanced professional knowledge / see more of the world / more opportunities in future”以短语并列呈现理由,构成隐性排比结构

【文字校对】

• "entrancee_amination"应为"entrance examination"

• "t he fundamental one"应为"the fundamental one"

• "pe rson"应为"person"

• "gr aduate"应为"graduate"

• "wor ld"应为"world"

• "mor e"应为"more"

【写作亮点】

✓ 观点清晰,以“my choice”为锚点统摄全文,逻辑主线鲜明

✓ 语言地道,灵活运用upon doing、the more...the more...等高阶句式

✓ 结构完整,背景—观点—理由—升华层层递进,符合议论文范式

✓ 用词精准,如“unambitious”“indifferent”“profound”等体现词汇掌控力

毕业后干什么

12月英语六级满分作文精讲:毕业后干什么,观点清晰,以“my choice”为锚点统摄全文,逻辑主线鲜明,语言地道,灵活运用upon doing、the more...the more...等高阶句式。
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