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慰问信

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6月大学英语四级作文范文:慰问信,称呼与落款格式规范,体现英文书信基本素养,情感层层递进,从震惊、共情到行动支持,逻辑自然流畅。

慰问信

作文范文

主题: 人文关怀、灾难应对、友情支持、责任担当、生命敬畏

2026年6月大学英语四级作文范文50例

a letter of condolence

你在报纸上看到你的朋友王志的家乡被飓风袭击,请你写一封慰问信向他表示你的关心。

范文

dear wang,

in today’s newspaper, i read about the recent events in your town and i am writing to e_tend my deepest condolences.

it broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane. i couldn’t believe my eyes when i saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help. i am really worried about you and your family, and all your friends there. i am crossing my fingers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.

i can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and i want to e_tend to you my unwavering support. our government and many nongovernmental organizations are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things to send to america. i donated all my allowance that i have been saving for years.

i feel e_tremely sorry for this tragedy, and i will be looking forward to hearing from you. please pass my concern on to your parents.

yours sincerely,

meng fei

精选读者点评

这封信里“a little girl crying on the roof”那句,画面一下子撞进来,心口发紧,写信就该这样,有眼睛,有心跳,有温度。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:应用文、书信、慰问信

适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级

【成语使用】

安全无恙、翘首以盼

【形容词】

深深的、悲惨的、小小的、焦急的、坚定的、必要的

【好词好句】

1. it broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane.

2. i couldn’t believe my eyes when i saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help.

3. i am crossing my fingers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.

【修辞手法】

比喻:”a little girl crying on the roof of her house“,以具象画面强化灾情冲击力,凸显无助与紧迫感

引用:”i am crossing my fingers for you“,化用英语习语,传递真挚祝愿

【文字校对】

• "e_tend"应为"extend"

• "america"应为"your hometown"或"the affected area"(语境中王志家乡在中国,范文误作america属地理事实错误)

【写作亮点】

✓ 称呼与落款格式规范,体现英文书信基本素养

✓ 情感层层递进,从震惊、共情到行动支持,逻辑自然流畅

✓ 细节描写生动,“crying on the roof”极具画面感和感染力

✓ 语言得体克制,慰问不失分寸,关切不越边界

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