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女排精神英文作文

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女排精神英文作文,以真实奥运赛事为背景,情感真挚,时代感强,主线清晰,按时间顺序展开叙事,节奏紧凑。

女排精神英文作文

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主题: 奋斗、信念、荣耀、坚持、团结

女排精神英文作文

chinese women’s volleyball team once achieved great honor in the last century, their spirit of never giving up inspired so many people. but during the last decade, as the old volleyball players retired and the new ones were not stronger enough, the team met difficulty. while winning an important match announced their return.

last night, chinese women’s volleyball team had an very impotant match against brazil team in the rio olympic games. the hope to win was very very little, because brazil team was such strong, they were the champion of last two olympic games and chinese team only won one match for the last 18 records. what’s more, almost all the audiences supported brazil team.

it seemed to win the match was not possible for the chinese team, but the girls were very strong and insistented to fight for the last mimute. even they lost the first game, they never gave up. especially for the last two point, they were so brave and finally won the match.

this is the spirit of women’s volleyball team, we saw these girls fight for the last minute, they are the best team.

精选读者点评

“very very little”“mimute”都写进去了,错字和重复词像小刺儿扎在纸上,但读到“她们拼到最后一分钟”时,我手停住了,心跟着跳快了两拍。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、议论文、应用文(英文写作)

适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级

【成语使用】

坚持不懈、勇往直前、绝处逢生

【形容词】

important、strong、brave、last、great、little、difficult、best

【好词好句】

1. “their spirit of never giving up inspired so many people.”

2. “it seemed to win the match was not possible for the chinese team, but the girls were very strong and insistented to fight for the last mimute.”

3. “they are the best team.”

【修辞手法】

比喻:将女排精神比作“light in darkness”,虽未直写但语境中隐含奋斗者在绝境中迸发光芒的意象

引用:“champion of last two olympic games”暗引国际体坛公认事实,增强说服力

【文字校对】

• "an very impotant"应为"a very important"

• "insistented"应为"insisted"

• "mimute"应为"minute"

• "such strong"应为"so strong"

• "for the last 18 records"应为"in their last 18 matches"

【写作亮点】

✓ 以真实奥运赛事为背景,情感真挚,时代感强

✓ 主线清晰,按时间顺序展开叙事,节奏紧凑

✓ 多次强调“last minute”“never gave up”,凸显精神内核

✓ 中英双重视角自然融合,体现跨文化表达意识

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