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生活时间角度

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12月大学英语四级作文写作角度:生活时间角度,中英双语对照结构清晰,便于理解与积累,多处使用因果逻辑链强化观点说服力。

生活时间角度

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主题: 学业平衡、时间管理、身心健康、家庭教育、校园生活

(1) we have been always considering sth (recreational activities) as something to rela_ ourselves or something that can add c3olor to the dull routine of every day life.

我们一直认为娱乐活动可以让我们放松,可以为我们每天枯燥的生活增添一些色彩。

(2) sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment

n 对大多数人来讲,阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源

(4)furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.

而且,学生生活在自己家中,有舒适的生活,并有更多机会和父母交流,这对他们个性的培养是有利的。

(5) sth, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.

sth 很有建设意义的占据了人们的空余时间,使得人们很满足,进而没有时间来觉得无聊。

(6)sth does not occupy students’ too much time. in fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. as an old saying goes: all work and no play makes jack a dull boy.

sth 不会占据学生太多的时间.实际上让他们把所有的时间都花在学习上也是不健康的,就如一句俗话所说:劳逸结合

(7)what‘s more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.

而且,生活在学校里能节省大量每天往返于学校和家的路上的时间,这会使他们有更多的时间和精力放在学习上。

(8)furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.

精选读者点评

这篇作文里“劳逸结合”那句用得真巧!后面还悄悄藏了个谚语,看得出你平时有积累。然而第(4)和第(8)段几乎一模一样,像复印出来的,建议划掉一段,换点新例子,比如你自个儿怎么安排周末的?

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:议论文、英语写作素材、教育类应用文

适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级

【成语使用】

劳逸结合

【形容词】

枯燥、舒适、建设意义、有益、满足

【好词好句】

1. sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment

2. sth does not occupy students’ too much time. in fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.

3. as an old saying goes: all work and no play makes jack a dull boy.

【修辞手法】

引用:all work and no play makes jack a dull boy.

【文字校对】

• "rela_"应为"relax"

• "c3olor"应为"color"

• "n 对大多数人来讲"中“n”为多余字符,应删除

• "a which have beneficial impact"语法错误,缺名词,应为"a environment which has beneficial impact"

• "spend all of time"应为"spend all of their time"

【写作亮点】

✓ 中英双语对照结构清晰,便于理解与积累

✓ 多处使用因果逻辑链强化观点说服力

✓ 善用俗语增强表达的生动性与文化厚度

✓ 句式灵活,含主谓宾、定语从句、状语从句等多样化结构

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