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英语老师

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教师英语作文:英语老师,以真实学习经历为线索,情感真挚自然,人物描写简明而有温度,突出教师形象感染力。

英语老师

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主题: 勤奋、信任、教育温度、自我认同、语言学习

my name is mengmeng, i am a midddle school student ,my grades are not very good, my favorite subject is english .

i like my english teacher mr li. though he teaches me only one year, i like his lessons and teaching method.

he is a middle-age man, he often tells us that english is very important ,as a second language ,it is not easy for us to learn english very well.

i like listening english music, sometimes i listen or watch english programs on radio or tv.but these ways are not enough.so i do as he asks. for e_ample :do one reading a day, try my best to memorise ten new words every day ,learn two or three good articles by heart every week and so on.

mr li is a helpful gentleman ,he makes me feel warm. he said grades are not only, i agree with him. as a student talent is not the most important, i believe i can be good at english, because i work hard and i have such a good teacher.

精选读者点评

萌萌,英语名写对啦!但“midddle”多打了一个d,“e_ample”缺字母x,这些小错像鞋里硌脚的沙子,顺手抖掉就舒服多了。你写mr. li时眼睛发亮的样子,我隔着纸都看见了。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、写人作文

适合年级:初中一年级、初中二年级

【成语使用】

事半功倍、熟能生巧

【形容词】

middle-age、helpful、warm、important、good

【好词好句】

1. he is a middle-age man, he often tells us that english is very important.

2. as a second language, it is not easy for us to learn english very well.

3. i believe i can be good at english, because i work hard and i have such a good teacher.

【修辞手法】

比喻:将英语比作“second language”,凸显其学习地位与难度特征

【文字校对】

• "midddle"应为"middle"

• "listening english music"应为"listening to english music"

• "e_ample"应为"example"

• "grades are not only"应为"grades are not everything"

【写作亮点】

✓ 以真实学习经历为线索,情感真挚自然

✓ 人物描写简明而有温度,突出教师形象感染力

✓ 中英文混用符合初中生语言表达实际,体现成长痕迹

✓ 结尾升华有力,将个人努力与师长影响有机融合

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