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土地的使用

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2026考博英语作文范文:土地的使用,视野开阔,立足全球人口格局审视国土生态问题,逻辑递进清晰,从耕地危机到工程影响,再到工业与城市污染,层层深入。

土地的使用

作文范文

主题: 发展与保护、责任与代价、现实与远见、人地关系、环境伦理、代际公平

in your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry?

with a population accounting nearly for one quarter of the world population, my country, china, has been suffering from serious loss of arable land, which now hardly accounts for 7% of overall arable land of the world. yet some people simply did not realize that land loss is so crucial that we one day might incapable of averting that catastrophe if we now close our eyes to it.

industrial development without careful consideration regarding land preservation has caused problems more serious than people can ever imagine. take the great san_ia dam for e_ample, which will be put into operation ne_t year. while the country benefits from gargantuan potential of electricity generation, we have to face up to various environmental conservation issues concerning geological and ecological environment along both river sides and whole upper reaches. the professional designers of the great dam now have to work out a practical way to prevent and remedy pollution effectively, which has already been the focus of world attention.

after the entrance of the wto, industry development is more and more important for our country, yet we should be careful about the pollution which is inevitably caused by industry. recent surveys have shown that refuse treatment engineering is not well financed in china, while attentions are drawn to those much more obvious achievements. industrial pollution accidents occur far more frequently in our still developing country than in other more advanced countries. urban population also produce astoundingly large amount of pollution. today the alleged white pollution is creeping all over the country – people throw plastic bags, films everywhere, never feeling anything wrong.

we no doubt need land either for natural condition or for industry, and it seems we need more if possible. nevertheless, we live in a world where everything has its cost, and some day in the future, i believe, we will inescapably pay for what we have ignored.

精选读者点评

这篇作文里“白污染”这个词用得扎实!塑料袋满天飞,谁没见过?但你能把它和土地命运扯一块儿说,脑子转得快。话说回来“san_ia”“e_ample”“ne_t”这些下划线漏删了,交卷前扫一眼哈。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:议论文、环保类话题作文

适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级

【成语使用】

不堪设想、不可避免、举世瞩目、触目惊心

【形容词】

严重、巨大、实际、明显、惊人、严峻

【好词好句】

1. “with a population accounting nearly for one quarter of the world population, my country, china, has been suffering from serious loss of arable land…”

2. “we have to face up to various environmental conservation issues concerning geological and ecological environment…”

3. “today the alleged white pollution is creeping all over the country…”

【修辞手法】

比喻:“white pollution is creeping all over the country”,以“creeping”喻指白色污染蔓延之隐蔽性与不可控性,形象传神

排比:无严格排比结构,但“geological and ecological environment along both river sides and whole upper reaches”含并列成分,体现逻辑延展性

【文字校对】

• "san_ia"应为"sanxia"

• "e_ample"应为"example"

• "ne_t"应为"next"

• "gargantuan"应为"gigantic"(属用词不当,非拼写错误;但结合语境,“gargantuan”为生造误用,标准英语中常用gigantic/enormous/massive)

• "we one day might incapable of averting…"应为"we might one day be incapable of averting…"

【写作亮点】

✓ 视野开阔,立足全球人口格局审视国土生态问题

✓ 逻辑递进清晰,从耕地危机到工程影响,再到工业与城市污染,层层深入

✓ 语言兼具思辨性与表现力,如“creeping”“alleged”等词精准传递批判意味

✓ 结尾收束有力,以“we will inescapably pay for what we have ignored”升华警醒意识

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