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英语小作文：我的祖母，时间线索清晰，以“last sunday”“then”“in the evening”自然串联事件，动作描写简洁连贯，动词选用准确（visited、listened、planted、counted、helped、washed、cleaned、watched、played）。
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亲情、劳动、成长、生活、音乐、日常
last sunday,i visited my grandmother.we listened to music and planted flowers.i counted the flowers.there were ten..then i helped my grandmother cook lunch.when we finished,i washed the dishes and she cleaned the kitchen.in the evening,i watched tv and played the violin at home,it was fun.
上星期日，我拜访了我的祖母，我们听音乐，种植花卉，我数了十个..然后我帮我的奶奶做午饭。当我们结束了，我洗餐具和她打扫厨房。在晚上，我看电视，并在家里演奏小提琴，它是乐趣。
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