my holiday

发布时间：2026-10-23 08:00:02 阅读：97

导语

经典英语作文：my holiday，时间线索清晰，按周六、周日自然分段，中英文对照呈现，体现双语表达意识。

my holiday

✎作文范文

主题： 成长体验、亲子互动、假日生活、日常温情

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i had a happy holiday last week.

on saturday morning,i watched tv and helped my mother wash clothes.in the afternoon,i cleaned three bedrooms in my house-- mine,my parents’ and my brother’s.

on sunday,i played football in the park.then i went to my grandparents’ house.grandpa played the piano!the whole family was so happy.later,we wanted to swim.but it was too cold.

this was a really nice holiday .

上周我有一个快乐的假期。

星期六上午，我看电视，帮妈妈洗衣服。在下午，我打扫了三间卧室在我的房子——我的，我的父母和我弟弟的。

上星期日，我在公园踢足球。然后我去爷爷奶奶家。爷爷弹钢琴！全家人都很高兴。后来，我们想去游泳。但它是冷的。

这真是一个愉快的假期。

✎精选读者点评

动词用得跃然纸上！“洗”“扫”“踢”“弹”“游”，全是脚踩在地上发出的声音，你写出了假期的力气感。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型：记叙文、日记体

适合年级：小学三年级、小学四年级、小学五年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

happy、nice、cold、whole、pleasant、excited

【好词好句】

1. grandpa played the piano! the whole family was so happy.

2. this was a really nice holiday.

3. on saturday morning, i watched tv and helped my mother wash clothes.

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "in the afternoon,i cleaned three bedrooms in my house-- mine,my parents’ and my brother’s."应为"in the afternoon, i cleaned three bedrooms in my house—mine, my parents’, and my brother’s."

• "on sunday,i played football"应为"on sunday, i played football"

• "it was too cold."应为"it was too cold."

• "this was a really nice holiday ."应为"this was a really nice holiday."

• "星期六上午，我看电视，帮妈妈洗衣服。在下午，我打扫了三间卧室在我的房子，我的，我的父母和我弟弟的。"应为"星期六上午，我看电视，帮妈妈洗衣服。下午，我打扫了家里的三间卧室，我的、爸爸妈妈的和我弟弟的。"

• "上星期日，我在公园踢足球。"应为"星期日，我在公园踢足球。"