英语作文80词:my dream home,情感真挚自然,以生活细节承载深切渴望,结构清晰,从现实处境到内心向往层层递进。

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my dream home
im in a single-parent families,so i am long for a home which is full of love and happiness.
even though i now live in a big house that my mom struggled for 5 years.i still feel that i am not happy . i can go back home after schooland ask my father to play games with me ,but also my mum can not listen to my school story because she is alway outside for her work.
so, i am lonely ,and i wishthat i would have a full home and i can share everything with my father and mother. in my oppion a so called home is not only a house for live but also a harbour which i can share my sorrow with my lover.a love home forever.

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