暑假夏天的英语作文

200字
主题:夏日生活、自然景象、儿童乐趣、季节特征

暑假关于夏天的英语作文

in the summer,the days are longer and the nights are shouter.its very hot.people like to go swimming.i like swimming very much.so i often go to the swimming poll in the summer .and i can swim very well.

in the summer the trees and leaves are green.flowers are open too.people don like to go outside.they want to stay at home.because in the room.its very cool.

in the summer.people like to eat ice-cream.so there are many kinds of ice-cream.

i like swimming and i like eat ice-cream.so i like summer too.

精选读者点评

句子基本通顺,能用英语表达夏天的活动和感受,挺棒!注意“shouter”是拼错了,应该是“shorter”;“swimming poll”也写成“pool”啦~还有“i like eat ice-cream”要改成“eating”哦,动词搭配别漏掉-ing!

暑假农村生活实录

500字
主题:实践育人、乡土情怀、知识价值、青春担当

this years summer vacation was most enjoyable. i spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside,where i saw mountains and fields covered with green plants. sometimes i went swimming in the river to the west of the village, the water in which was quite clear.

今年我过了一个最愉快的暑假.有15天时间,我帮爷爷在乡下干农活,在那里有着满山遍野的绿树、庄嫁.有时,我也去村子西边的小河里游泳,那里的河水清澈见底.

i kept a diary every day. besides doing farm work, i help the children in the neighborhood with their lessons. all of them showed much interest in english. they could read and write well, but they could hardly understand simple english. so every day in the morning i spent about two hours helping them improve their listening and spoken english. they all made great progress. their parents all thought highly of me. i now realize that knowledge is very much needed in the countryside.

每天,我都坚持写日记.除了干农活外,我还辅导邻居家的小孩功课.孩子们对英语很感兴趣,他们的读写能力都不错,但连简单的英语都基本不懂.因此,每天早上我会抽出两个小时来帮助孩子们提高听力和口语,而且他们都取得很大的进步,孩子们的父母也对我赞赏有加.至此,我深深认识到,在农村知识是如此急缺.

精选读者点评

这个“清澈见底”用得扎实!后文写孩子听不懂英语,却没写你当时怎么教的,是画图?打手势?还是编了小歌谣?下次补一句试试。

我的假期生活

300字
主题:实践育人、乡土情怀、青春担当、知行合一

this years summer vacation was most enjoyable. i spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside, where i saw mountains fields covered with green plants. sometimes i went swimming in the river to the west of the village, the water in which was quite clear.

i kept a diary every day. besides doing farm work, i help the children in the neighborhood with their lessons. all of them showed interest in english. they could read write wellthey could hardly understand simple english. so every day in the morning i spent about two hours helping them improve their listening spoken english. they all made great progress. their parents all thought highly of me. i now realize that knowledge is very needed in the countryside.

精选读者点评

这个“水清得能数清小石子”的细节亮眼吸睛!后文要是也这样用眼睛说话,就更打动人了。