make homgworker-做家务

250字
主题:劳动教育、家庭责任、全面发展、亲子关系

is it good for students to do some housework

some people think studengts need not do any housework.they think the only thing students need do is to study well. i don’t think so. it is good for students to do some housework for three reason.

firstly,to do some housework can make you independent.you can’t depend on others all your life.so,you should learn to do some housework now.

secondly, to do some housework can keep you healthy and strong ,some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical e_ercise.

finally, to do some housework can share your parents’ work .they must be happy if you say” have a rest ,and i will do the housework”

so i think it is good for students to do some housework

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这篇作文观点清晰,三个理由也挺真心!然而“e_ercise”漏了个r,记得补上哦~还有“studengts”拼错了,多检查两遍就更棒啦!

integrity

200字
主题:品格修养、学生责任、行为准则、道德实践

what is integrity? integrity is a good quality of being honest. it is a fine virtue for everyone. a man of integrity is loved by all. without integrity, he will lose the best friend.

integrity is especially important for students. we should finish our homework independently. we must return books when it is due. we should listen to the teacher carefully no matter what kind of lesson it is. if we promise to do something, we should try our best to do it well.

注释:

1) a man of integrity一个正直的人

2) when it is due到期

3) no matter what kind of lesson it is.无论是什么课

精选读者点评

整篇英文写得挺顺,but“a man of integrity is loved by all”这句太绝对啦!生活中真有正直却被人排挤的,下次试试加个“usually”或“often”吧!

初中英语作文写作方法技巧

650字
主题:英语写作、教学策略、语言习惯、初中英语、句子建构

这得从初中一开始就抓起,首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练,做到有效积累,扩大视野,灵活运用。

如:如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的“说”?我们就可以写出许多:say some thing gladly(merrily e_citedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently)

还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词,生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。

扩词有:play football——play foot ball in the play ground——play football in the play ground with my friends——play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames,play the piano…等,后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。

又如:a friend——my friend——my close friend——my close friend named mary.以此类推,我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。the students love life.——the studentsof class one love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复,我们还可以转换不同的句型,来表达同一内容。如:the dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.——the dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.——the dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket.

这样训练写句的方法,可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文,然后逐字翻译的不良习惯,从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。

在平时的学习中,我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇,设计一些中译英句子,虽然对初中学生有一定的难度,但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构,巩固所学词汇,做到活学活用,为中考作文作好铺垫。

在《牛津》7b开始,我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景,设计了许多中译英,如:

尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了,他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…)

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这个“说”字的变体整理得真细!gladly、timidly、bravely……每个副词都像给句子装了小翅膀,读着就活起来了。话说回来“sweetl ytimidly”中间少了个空格,下次誊抄时顺手补上哈~