01
使用特殊句式
①as a saying goes,the little thing matters most.
→as a saying goes,it is the little thing that matters most.(强调句)
②the children can grow up healthy mentally and physically only in this way.
→only in this way can the children grow up healthy mentally and physically.(倒装句)
③if it is so,i hope you will have a wonderful time.
→if so,i hope you will have a wonderful time.(省略句)
④it is a very splendid moment.
→how splendid a moment it is!/what a splendid moment it is!(感叹句)
⑤i won first prize with my teachers help.
→without my teachers help,i couldn have won first prize.(虚拟语气)
02
巧用从句
①如果他们在考试中经常作弊,他们就会养成一个坏习惯,这将会对他们的生活产生坏的影响。
if they often cheat in the e_ams,they will develop a bad habit,and it will have a bad effect on their life.
→if they often cheat in the e_ams,they will develop a bad habit,which will have a bad effect on their life.(定语从句)
②这正是我想要的。
it is just the thing i want.
→it is just what i want.(名词性从句)
03
善用非谓语动词
众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会给人单调乏味之感,句子与句子之间的关系也会显得松散;而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘,读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词可以使文章结构更紧凑,表达更流畅。
运用非谓语动词转换简单句
写作时,我们可以利用非谓语动词将两个简单句转换成较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用三步法。
第一步:写出两个简单句。
第二步:让句②作主句,用非谓语动词改写句①。
第三步:句①表示原因,其中的动词feel与主语i之间为主谓关系,故用现在分词短语作原因状语,即feeling quite sorry for that,i begin to think about what to do to help.
举一反三
①另一方面,我将帮着建立英语角,给我们学生提供一个练习英语口语的平台。
翻译:on the other hand,i will help set up an english corner. i will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral english.
可用现在分词作状语将其转换为→on the other hand,i will help set up an english corner,providing us students with a platform to practice our oral english.
②这里的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。
翻译:all the people here like the novel. it is written by tom.
可用过去分词作定语将其转换为→all the people here like the novel written by tom.