世界上没有树木

400字
主题:环境保护、生态意识、人类命运、可持续发展

have you ever imagined a world without trees? try it, and you will see the whole world dry up and look like a broken tortoise shell. at night, the temperature would drop sharply. living creatures could not run away and it would be as if they lived in hell.

there are some effective steps we can take now to protect trees. first, strict laws must be enforced. second, the government should offer subsidies to people who plant trees.

most important of all, every citizen must develop an awareness of the importance of trees and remember: no trees means no living things.

你曾经想象过一个没有树的世界吗?试一下,你会看到整个世界都干涸了,看起来像一个破碎的龟壳。在夜间,温度会急剧下降。生物不能逃跑,它会像他们住在地狱一样。

我们现在可以采取一些有效措施来保护树木。首先,必须执行严格的法律。其次,政府应该向那些种树的人提供补贴。

最重要的是,每个公民都必须意识到树木的重要性,记住:没有树就不意味着生活。

精选读者点评

龟壳这个比喻真亮眼!干涸 地狱,画面一下子撞进脑子里,但“它会像他们住在地狱一样”这句主语悄悄换人了,读着绊脚。

教室保持安静

250字
主题:课堂纪律、学习环境、自我管理、同伴关系

i am studying in a primary school now, my classmates are very active, when the teacher ask them the questions, they response very happily. but there is the problem, they keep active all the time, even when the teacher ask us to write the homework, i am disturbed by them, i can’t focus my mind, they should keep quiet in the classroom.

我现在在一所小学上学,我的同学很活跃,当老师问她们问题的时候,他们很高兴地回答。但是问题也来了,他们一直都很活跃,甚至当老师叫我们做作业的时候,我被他们吵到,我无法集中精力,他们应该在教室里保持安静。

精选读者点评

观察真细!连“写作业时被吵得没法集中”都记下来了,生活味儿足。唯独“they keep active all the time”翻成“一直都很活跃”,听着像夸人,可后头又说烦,语气有点拧。试试换个词?比如“闹腾”“停不下来”呢!

my favorite people

250字
主题:母爱、家庭、成长、感恩、平凡伟大、日常温情

who is your favorite people? my favorite people is my mother. she is beautiful. she is 38 years old. she is tall and thin. she has big eyes and long hair. she likes cooking. she cooks good meals for us every day. and she always does all the housework. she looks after my father and me. i love my mother very much.

你最喜欢的人是谁?我最喜欢的人是我的母亲。她是美丽的。她38岁。她又高又瘦。她有一双大眼睛和长头发。她喜欢烹饪。她每天为我们做好吃的饭菜。她总是做所有的家务。她照顾我的父亲和我。我非常爱我的母亲。

精选读者点评

句子太“平”啦!试试把“她喜欢烹饪”改成“灶台边的她,系着蓝围裙,锅铲一翻就飘出葱花香”哦!

小学五年级大海英语作文及翻译

300字
主题:海洋特征、科学常识、语言对照、观察体验

the sea

some people have seen the sea, but others haven . the sea looks beautiful on a fine day. but it can be very rough when there is a strong wind.

the sea is very large. there is more sea in the world than land.

if you have swum in the sea, you know that the sea is salty. do you know the dead sea? it is so salty that you can sink when you are in the water. and fish can live in it!

有些人见过大海,可是另一些人没见过。在晴朗的日子,大海看起来很美,可是在刮大风时,大海很粗暴。

海很大。世界上的海洋比陆地大的多。

如果你曾在大海中游过泳,你就知道海水是咸的。你知道死海吗?那里的水很咸,当你在水中时,你不会沉下去。鱼在那儿不能生存。

精选读者点评

中英文对照写海,挺有心思!但“粗暴”形容大海稍显生硬,换成“汹涌”或“咆哮”是不是更身临其境感?后面死海那句逗号用错了,两句话挤成一团啦。

happy day

350字
主题:节日快乐、同伴交往、健康意识、童年时光

i had a wonderful holiday at spring festival.i went to the park with my friends.we met at eight oclock at the school gate.we went to the park by bike.it was a beautiful day.we sat under a big tree and chated with each other.we took about some movies and some fun things.we had lunch there.we ate hamburgers and some drinks,but i know they are not healthy and not good for us.then we played some games.

we were all fell tired,but we were very happy!it was great fun!

我在春节有一个美妙的假期。我和我的朋友去公园。我们八点在校门口集合。我们骑自行车去公园。这是美丽的一天。我们坐在一棵大树下互相聊天。我们看了一些电影和一些有趣的事情。我们在那里吃午饭。我们吃了汉堡包和一些饮料,但我知道他们是不健康的,对我们不好。然后我们玩了一些游戏。

我们都累了,但我们很高兴!很有趣!

精选读者点评

开头用英文写得挺顺,但后面中英文混着来就乱啦!“chated”拼错啦,“fell tired”也该是“felt tired”,这些小坑跳多了,作文分就悄悄溜走咯~