八年级简单英语作文-my favorite movies

300字
主题:自我介绍、影视爱好、中英表达、成长印记

hello,boys and girls!my name is jenny.i‘m 14-year-old.my birthday is on october 31st.i‘m a movie fan.i like action movie and science movie. my favorite actor is jackie chan.he is a great action actor. he has many movies . for e_ample.the around the world is 80 days,rob-b-hood andrush hour.these movies are very e_citing. i really like rob-b-hood very much,because they are e_citing.

i like action movie movies very much.

你好,男孩和女孩!我的名字是珍妮。我14-year-old.my生日是十月三十一日。我是个电影迷。我喜欢动作片和科幻电影。我最喜欢的演员是成龙,他是一个伟大的动作演员。他有许多电影。例如。周围的世界是80天,宝贝计划andrush小时这些电影是非常令人兴奋的。我真的很喜欢宝贝计划,因为他们是令人兴奋的。

我非常喜欢动作片电影。

精选读者点评

“14-year-old”要加冠词哦,是“a 14-year-old”;“rob-b-hood”拼错了,是“baby plan”不是“宝贝计划”,中英混着写,得小心“名字搬家”啦!

the mid-autumn festival

400字
主题:传统节日、亲情温暖、文化认同、幸福时刻

the mid-autumn festival is a very important chinese festival. it’s on lunar fifth of august.

in the evening, we have a big dinner. look, there is a lot of delicious food on the table. we can drink a glass of juice. we stand beside the table and we say, “cheers, cheers, happy mid-autumn festival!” we make a wish to each other. at night, the moon is usually round and bright. it looks like a ball. we can enjoy the moon. moon cakes are the special food for this festival. we can eat moon cakes, too. in the mid-autumn festival, my parents and i are all very happy and e_cited.

中秋节是一个非常重要的中国节日。月第五号的。 晚上,我们吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。看,桌子上有很多好吃的食物。我们可以喝一杯果汁。我们站在桌子旁,说:“干杯,干杯,中秋节快乐!“我们希望彼此。晚上,月亮通常是圆的,明亮的。它看起来像一个球。我们可以欣赏月亮。月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。我们也可以吃月饼。在中秋节,我的父母和我都非常高兴和兴奋。

精选读者点评

“月第五号的”,这句读着怪怪的,翻回去查查农历八月十五怎么写?别让小错误拖累好内容。

初二英语作文-帮助他人

450字
主题:助人快乐、童心向善、生活教育、朴素情感

i am a friendly boy. i like to make friends. but i like to eat, too. my mother gives me some money every day. i always go to buy something to eat. i eat in the class, after school and while playing.

one day i went to school with 10 yuan. suddenly i saw a little boy sitting at the gate of a shop. he was asking people for money. i was surprised. a boy, younger than me! he should go to school like me! i walked to him, asked, what s wrong, little brother? my parents were dead. so i had nothing. he was sad. i touched my money. i really wanted to buy some delicious snacks to eat. at last, i gave him my money! he was very happy, so was i.

我是一个友好的男孩。我喜欢交朋友。但我也喜欢吃。我妈妈每天给我一些钱。我总是去买东西吃。我在课堂上吃,放学后,在玩。

有一天我去学校10元。突然我看见一个小男孩坐在一家商店的门口。他在向人们要钱。我很惊讶。一个男孩,比我年轻!他应该像我一样去上学!我走到他跟前,问道:“什么是错的,小弟弟?”我父母都死了。所以我什么也没有了。”他很伤心。我碰了我的钱。我真的想买一些好吃的零食吃。最后,我给了他我的钱!他很高兴,我也很高兴。

精选读者点评

这个“碰了碰钱”的动作写得真好!手悬在半空那一下,比直接掏钱还让人心里难受。后面“他高兴,我也高兴”太干净了,留白刚好。

初二暑假英语作文-互相帮助

450字
主题:助人为乐、关爱他人、同理心、善意传递、平凡善举

people help with each other, it is the greatest thing in the world. we should give our love to people who need help.

it was a nice day. a blind person ben walked with a walking stick. when he was walking down the street, a little boy tumbled because of banana skin. maybe there is something wrong with his legs. so the little boy cried sat on the floor. although ben can’t see anything, he walked to the little boy. ben wanted to help the boy. so ben said,” don’t cry. let me help you.” the little boy was very happy. ben carried the little boy on the back. the little boy help ben, too. so they were very happy.

if you see someone needs help, please help him. i’m sure you will be very happy

人们互相帮助,这是世界上最伟大的事情。我们应该把我们的爱给那些需要帮助的人。

这是一个美好的一天。一个盲人本和一根手杖走了。当他在街上散步时,一个小男孩因香蕉皮跌倒了。也许他的腿有点毛病。小男孩哭着坐在地板上。虽然本什么都看不见,他走到小男孩。本想帮助男孩。所以本说,“不要哭。让我来帮你。”小男孩很高兴。本带小男孩在后面。小男孩也帮助本。所以他们很高兴。

如果你看到有人需要帮助,请帮助他。我相信你会很高兴

精选读者点评

这个“本背着男孩走”的画面真暖!但“带小男孩在后面”是不是想写“把小男孩背在背上”?顺手改一改,读者一下就懂了。