万圣节

发布时间：2026-03-27 14:50:02 字数：350字阅读：58

导语

九年级万圣节英语作文范文：万圣节，以民间传说切入，自然引出节日符号的由来，时间线索清晰，从传说起源到民俗演变再到现代呈现，脉络分明。

万圣节

✎作文范文

主题： 文化起源、节日符号、民间传说、中西对比、传统传承

one story about jack, an irishman, who was not allowed into heaven because he was stingy with his money. so he was sent to hell. but down there he played tricks on the devil (satan), so he was kicked out of hell and made to walk the earth forever carrying a lantern.

well, irish children made jacks lanterns on october 31st from a large potato or turnip, hollowed out with the sides having holes and lit by little candles inside. and irish children would carry them as they went from house to house begging for food for the village halloween festival that honored the druid god muck olla. the irish name for these lanterns was jack with the lantern or jack of the lantern, abbreviated as jack-o-lantern and now spelled jack-o-lantern.

the traditional halloween you can read about in most books was just childrens fun night. halloween celebrations would start in october in every elementary school.

halloween is a western festival. it’s on oct.31th. it’s a happy time for children

✎精选读者点评

这个“吝啬鬼杰克”的故事讲得真顺溜！连魔鬼都被他耍了，读着像听隔壁爷爷讲故事～可第二段“土豆挖空点蜡烛”那段，要是配上你画的小灯笼草图，就更活啦！

名师·深度剖析

作文类型：说明文、文化介绍文

适合年级：小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

stingy、hollowed、little、happy、western

【好词好句】

1. “so he was kicked out of hell and made to walk the earth forever carrying a lantern.”

2. “jack with the lantern or jack of the lantern, abbreviated as jack-o-lantern and now spelled jack-o-lantern.”

3. “halloween celebrations would start in october in every elementary school.”

【修辞手法】

比喻：[“jack with the lantern”将人物与器物并置，形成拟人化意象，赋予传说以具象生命感]

【文字校对】

• "oct.31th"应为"oct. 31st"

• "childrens"应为"children’s"

• "irish"首字母未大写，应为"irish"（全文共5处，统一规范）

• "druid god muck olla"中"muck olla"为人名，应首字母大写

【写作亮点】

✓ 以民间传说切入，自然引出节日符号的由来

✓ 时间线索清晰，从传说起源到民俗演变再到现代呈现，脉络分明

✓ 专有名词中英文对照自然嵌入，体现文化转换意识

✓ 句式长短结合，叙述节奏轻快，契合儿童读者认知特点

万圣节