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a letter to my friend

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九年级英语作文带翻译:a letter to my friend,选取典型城市进行双线对照,结构清晰,中英双语并置,体现跨文化观察视角。

a letter to my friend

作文范文

主题: 城市比较、文化差异、生活观察、语言实践

i have been living in beijing for some time now and i find it very interesting here.

there are so many similarities between beijing and london. they are both the capital of the country and are both very important cities. both places have huge populations. they are both the economical, political and cultural center. they both have many historical and cultrual

i also found many differences in the two cities. in london we drive on the left side of the road, while in beijing they drive on the right side. most people in london go to work via public transportation, here in beijing most people rides bycicles. in london the weather is always cloudy, here in beijing most the the time its sunny. and in london most student don spend their time efficiently, but here in beijing many people speak english cause they study hard.

regards,

peter

我一直在北京生活了一段时间了,我觉得很有意思这里。

有北京和伦敦之间如此多的相似之处。他们是国家的首都和都是非常重要的城市。这两个地方都有巨大的群体。他们都是经济,政治,文化中心。他们都有许多历史文化

我还发现在这两个城市有许多差异。在伦敦,我们开车在公路的左侧,而在北京,他们开车在右侧。大多数人在伦敦去搭乘公共交通工具上班,在北京大多数人骑自行车。在伦敦的天气总是阴,在北京大部分时间是晴天。而在伦敦的学生不花自己的时间有效的,但在北京很多人会说英语的原因,他们努力学习

问候,

彼得

精选读者点评

“cultural”拼成“cultrual”,还漏了“r”;“most the the time”也多打了一个“the”,抄单词时眼睛得像扫描仪啊!

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:对比类记叙文、书信体

适合年级:初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

重要、巨大、历史、文化、阴、晴

【好词好句】

1. “there are so many similarities between beijing and london.”

2. “in london we drive on the left side of the road, while in beijing they drive on the right side.”

3. “in london the weather is always cloudy, here in beijing most the the time its sunny.”

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "cultrual"应为"cultural"

• "rides bycicles"应为"ride bicycles"

• "most the the time"应为"most of the time"

• "don spend"应为"don’t spend"

• "cause"应为"because"

【写作亮点】

✓ 选取典型城市进行双线对照,结构清晰

✓ 中英双语并置,体现跨文化观察视角

✓ 句式以简单句为主,符合初学写作者语言习惯

✓ 关注交通、天气、学习等生活化维度,真实可感

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