动物园注意事项

作文类型：说明文、应用文

适合年级：小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

largest、free、dangerous、clean、good

【好词好句】

1. "the children over 1.20 m in height can pay only half of it"

2. "while visiting the zoo, you’d better not feed the animals with the food you take"

3. "please keep the zoo clean as well"

4. "wish you a good time!"

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "is the largest one in our city"应为"is the largest zoo in our city"

• "the children over 1.20 m in height"应为"children who are over 1.20 m tall"

• "the ones under 1.20 m"应为"children under 1.20 m tall"

• "from 9:00 am to 4:00 pm on weekdays and from 8:00 am to 5:30 pm on weekends"应为"from 9:00 am to 4:00 pm on weekdays, and from 8:00 am to 5:30 pm on weekends"

• "that would be very dangerous ."应为"that would be very dangerous."

【写作亮点】

✓ 信息层级清晰，票价、开放时间、注意事项分点明确

✓ 中英双语对照自然，体现实用交际功能

✓ 情感表达得体，“wish you a good time!”收尾亲切温馨

✓ 安全提示具体可行，体现人文关怀意识