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高二年级英语作文范例,观点清晰,以健康为统领,层层展开饮食、运动、社交三重维度,逻辑递进自然,从生理健康延伸至心理健康,体现思维深度。

高二年级英语作文

作文范文

主题: 身心健康、生活方式、生命价值、人际支持、自律精神

高二年级英语作文范例

what is the most important thing in the world? i think it is health.

you can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. but if our health was taken away, we would surely die. that is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and e_ercise regularly.

in order to eat healthily, i usually avoid eating food high in fat, like french fries or cookies. i also eat little meat. i eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins.

taking e_ercise every day helps us build a strong body. regular e_ercise is an important part of keeping me healthy.

whats more, i think friends are an important part of ones health. many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don . i always feel better when i am with friends than when i am alone. when i am with my friends, i always laugh. laughing is also an important part of health. i like to laugh with my friends.

by eating properly and e_ercising regularly, i can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. by spending time with my friends, i can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. i think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy.

精选读者点评

健康写得挺确实是!“吃蔬菜水果”“和朋友笑”这些细节,比空喊口号强多了。可是“e_ercise”拼错了三次,下次

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:议论文、英语应用文

适合年级:高一、高二、高三

【成语使用】

【形容词】

healthy、strong、proper、fresh、wide、regular、happy、important

【好词好句】

1. you can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. but if our health was taken away, we would surely die.

2. by eating properly and exercising regularly, i can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy.

3. by spending time with my friends, i can keep my mind as well as my body happy.

【修辞手法】

比喻:health is compared to the foundation of survival—“if our health was taken away, we would surely die” emphasizes its irreplaceable value through life-death contrast

【文字校对】

• "e_ercise"应为"exercise"

• "whats"应为"what's"

• "don ."应为"don’t"

• "e_ercising"应为"exercising"

• "e_ercise"(多处)应为"exercise"

【写作亮点】

✓ 观点清晰,以健康为统领,层层展开饮食、运动、社交三重维度

✓ 逻辑递进自然,从生理健康延伸至心理健康,体现思维深度

✓ 语言简洁有力,多用短句与并列结构增强节奏感

✓ 融入生活化细节,如“laugh with my friends”“fresh fruit which are full of vitamins”,真实可感

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