暑假计划

作文类型：应用文、英语作文

适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

intense、refreshing、senior、former、part-time

【好词好句】

1. the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation.

2. i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves.

3. to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.

【修辞手法】

排比：travel, work and study 构成并列结构，体现计划的多元性

【文字校对】

• "mount hua shan"应为"mount hua shan"

• "part time"应为"part-time"

• "former classmates(老同学)"中括号及中文注释不符合英文作文规范，应删去

【写作亮点】

✓ 主谓宾结构清晰，句式富有节奏感

✓ 动词短语精准有力，如"climb...to refresh"、"find...and conduct..."

✓ 逻辑衔接自然，用then、besides等过渡词体现时间与层次关系

✓ 主题聚焦明确，围绕"travel, work and study"三维展开