高中英语作文我的学校范文

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高中英语作文我的学校范文，以第一人称真实表达校园生活体验，句式长短结合，自然呈现师生互动场景。

高中英语作文我的学校范文

✎作文范文

主题： 师生情、校园生活、成长记忆、学习日常

i am in no.2 middle school. i love my school . there are more than 1,500 students in our school. we have math, english, chinese, music, art ,p.e and so on. our teachers are friendly to us . although they are strict with us on all subjects, we love them very much. in class, they teach us knowledges, after class, they often play games with us. such as football, ping-pong, volleyball.

i usually join art club or sports club after school. i think i am happy every day in the school. so i love it.

✎精选读者点评

标点太“省”啦！英文句号后要空一格再写下一个词，逗号后也一样，你数数这段里漏了多少空格？还有“knowledges”不能加s哦，知识是不可数名词。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型：记叙文、写人、写景

适合年级：初中一年级、初中二年级

【形容词】

friendly、strict、happy、more、such

【好词好句】

1. "although they are strict with us on all subjects, we love them very much."

2. "in class, they teach us knowledges, after class, they often play games with us."

3. "i think i am happy every day in the school."

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "knowledges"应为"knowledge"

• "no.2"应为"no. 2"

• "p.e"应为"p.e."

• "art ,p.e"应为"art, p.e."

【写作亮点】

✓ 以第一人称真实表达校园生活体验

✓ 句式长短结合，自然呈现师生互动场景

✓ 用"although"引导让步状语从句体现思维层次

✓ 结尾简洁有力，情感真挚收束全文

高中英语作文我的学校范文

✎作文范文

✎精选读者点评

名师·深度剖析

【形容词】

【好词好句】

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

【写作亮点】

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