小学生英语作文范文:难忘的一天,以时间顺序清晰展开家庭一日活动,结构自然流畅,多处使用“very 形容词”强化情感表达,符合儿童语言特点。

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today is sunday. my whole family had an unforgettable day.
we went shopping together. we bought many things, such as lollipops, ice creams, cornflakes, oranges, milk and bread. besides, my mother bought many toys for me. i like them very much.
after that we went to the zoo. i saw many animals. the monkeys are very interesting. the lions are very fearful. the hamsters are very cute.
we had our lunch under a big tree. my father told us some jokes. they are very funny.
we had a wonderful day.

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