小学英语作文:我的小秘密 my little secret,双语对照自然清晰,体现语言实践意识,以“秘密”为线索贯穿全文,结构简洁完整。

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我的小秘密 my little secret
i have a little secret, that is i have saved some money for myself. my parents don’t know, they still give me the pocket money in time, i save the pocket money for a long time. i want to use the money to buy what i want, i plan to give my parents some surprise when i save the enough money, this is my little secret.
我有一个秘密,那就是我已经存了一些钱。我的父母并不知道,他们仍然定时给我一些零花钱,我把这些钱省下来已经有一段时间了。我想要用这些钱来买我想要的,我计划着存了足够钱的时候,给我的父母一些惊喜,这是我的小秘密。

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