selbstvorstellung 自我介绍

200字
主题:成长、亲情、个性、热爱、交流、夏日

selbstvorstellung

hello! now , selbstvorstellung!

im cute girl , now im thirteen years old . i m form china . have got big family :my mother 、 my father 、 my sister 、my borther. we are very happy everyday! i have got tall nose and long hair and small mouth .

i like play football and swimming. i can speak chinese very well and i can speak some english . banana is my festival fruit. i like summer ,because summer is hot ,i can go swiming.

who can be my friend ?

精选读者点评

这个“selbstvorstellung”标题真新鲜!开头用德语打招呼,后面却全跑英语去了……你是不是刚学完德语又在上英语课呢!

我自己

350字
主题:成长、个性、热爱、友情、阅读、童年

hi!i am a happy and quiet girl.i am from china.i am twelve years old,i am a pupil,i am in class three gread four.i many good friends.i like many pets,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.i am tall ,i have around face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.i have a black long hair.i like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and…i like music …i often saying: book is my good friend,i like it!who am i?yes,my name is lv enhui.

do you like me?

参考翻译:

你好!我是一个快乐和安静的女孩。我来自中国。我十二岁,我是一个学生,我在三年级四班。我有很多好朋友。我喜欢很多宠物,孔雀熊猫兔子和鸟,他们是可爱的。我个子很高,我有圆圆的脸,还有大眼睛小嘴巴小鼻子。我有黑色的长头发。我喜欢食苹果香蕉e鸡肉和…我喜欢音乐…我经常说:书是我的好朋友,我喜欢它!我是谁?是的,我的名字是lv enhui。

你喜欢我吗?

精选读者点评

开头“hi!”真有活力!平心而论英文和中文混着写,像边想边敲键盘,下次试试先用中文打草稿?“peacock panda rabbit”这串词儿蹦得俏皮,但熊猫和孔雀可不是家养宠物哟~

this is me

200字
主题:成长、个性、热爱、友善、学习、生活

hi!i am a happy and quiet girl.i am from chin.i am twelve years old,i am a pupil,i am in class three gread four.i many good friends.i like many pet,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.i am tall ,i have around face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.i have a black long hair.i like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and...i like music sing run pinting...i often saying: book is my good frieng,i like it!whate am i?yes,my name is lv enhui.

do you like me?

精选读者点评

句子太碎啦!“i am…”连着七八个,读着喘可气~试试把“我十二岁,上四年级三班,有个圆脸、大眼睛、小鼻子”揉成一句话!

小学生英语自我介绍作文及翻译

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主题:热爱学校、师生关系、互助友爱、成长印记

introduce myself

hello, my name is gu siyao. my english name is hellen. i am 12 years old. i form _iouzhou e_perimental shool. i love my school. because my school is very beautiful and big .the trees are green and the sky is blue. the classes are interesting and e_citing. the teachers are not strict. and the students are very lovely. they always help each other.

翻译:

你好,我的名字是gu siyao。我的英文名字是hellen。我今年12岁。我来自西州实验学校。我爱我的学校。因为我的学校非常漂亮。树木是绿色的,天空是蓝色的。这些课程很有趣,也很令人兴奋。老师们并不严格。学生们都很可爱。他们总是互相帮助。

精选读者点评

名字拼写要注意哦,“gu siyao”首字母大写,“xizhou”不是“iouzhou”,“experimental”少了个r,还有下划线和空格得去掉。标点也悄悄改改:英文句末得有句号,别光靠空格断句啦!