为什么要在年幼时学习英语

300字
主题:语言学习、成长阶段、现实需求、教育时机、双语发展

why we need to learn english when our chinese is not very good? there must be many reasons. firstly, english is very important. english is more and more widely used in the current world. we will use it in the future. secondly, people often say that the best age to learn language is in the young age. last, we have enough time to learn new things. these are why we need to learn english in a young age.

我们为什么要在我们汉语还不是学得很好的时候学习英语呢?肯定有很多的原因。首先,英语是非常重要的。在当代世界英语被越来越被广泛地使用。以后我们肯定用得着。其次,人们常说学习语言的年龄是年幼的时候。最后,我们有足够的时间去学习新知识。这就是为什么我们要在年幼的时候学习英语。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺自在啊!“english is more and more widely used”那句,中文补译成“被越来越被广泛地使用”,多了一个“被”,读着像绕口令~顺手圈出来了,你再瞅瞅?

广场 the square

250字
主题:亲情、社区生活、代际互动、日常温情

there is a big square near my house. people like to get together there and have the long chat. my grandma likes to go there when she has the time. especially at night, after finishing dinner, my grandma will go to dance with her friends in the square. sometimes i will go with her, seeing my grandma dance and join her group.

我家附近有一个大广场。人们喜欢聚在那里,长时间的聊天。我奶奶一有时间就喜欢去那里。特别是在夜晚,吃完晚餐后,我奶奶会和她的朋友们一起去广场上跳舞。有时我会和她一起去,我看着奶奶跳舞,也会加入她的团队。

精选读者点评

奶奶跳舞的样子鲜活立体!“加入她的团队”这句相当有孩子气的自豪感,比写“一起跳”有意思多了。

future robot

300字
主题:科技温情、成长陪伴、语言能力、日常劳动、童趣生活

hello! i’m a future robot. my name is mini. i have two small eyes, a small nose and a very big mouth. i can read and write, and i can speak chinese and english. i can play football, basketball and badminton quite well. and i can sing and dance very well! but i can’t run and swim. i always cook the breakfast for my master. my master is sally. she is a pretty girl. she plays hopscotch very well. i love my master very much.

您好我是未来的机器人。我的名字是迷你。我有两只小眼睛,一个小鼻子和一个非常大的嘴巴。我能读写,我会说中文和英文。我能踢足球,篮球和羽毛球很好。我可以唱歌跳舞很好!但我不能跑和游泳。我总是为我的主人做早餐。我的主人是莎。她是个漂亮的女孩。她蹒跚着很好。我非常爱我的主人。

精选读者点评

“迷你”这名字真俏皮!中英文混搭的自我介绍,像机器人在眨眼睛~话说回来“蹒跚着很好”怕是打错了?莎莉玩的是跳房子吧呢!

the cat and the mouse

450字
主题:童趣、机智、胜负、反差、幽默、生活情境

one day, cat is in the basket. its very lazy. it is sleeping. now the cats food is beside the cat. one mouse is very hungry. it is eating the cats food. the cats food is so yummy. the cat wakes up. he is behind the mouse. he wants to catch the mouse. so,he is chasing the mouse. the mouse is afraid. he jumps onto the door. but, the door is high. the cat can catch the mouse. the mouse is under the chair now. it is running.the cat still can catch the mouse. the mouse runs fast. it runs into the hole. the hole is small. but, the cat is big. it can go into the hole. so, the cat is angry and tired. it is crying. its very sad. but the mouse is very happy!

有一天,猫在篮子里。这是非常懒惰。它在睡觉。现在,猫的食物在猫的旁边。一只老鼠很饿。它正在吃猫的食物。猫是如此美味的食物。猫醒来。他在老鼠的后面。他想抓住老鼠。所以,他在追老鼠。老鼠害怕。他跳上了门。但是,门是高。猫捉不到老鼠。老鼠在椅子下面。这是running.the猫不能抓老鼠。老鼠跑得很快。它跑进了洞里。这个洞很小。但是,猫是大。它不能进洞。所以,猫是愤怒和疲惫。它在哭泣。这是非常可悲的。但老鼠很高兴!

精选读者点评

猫睡篮子、鼠偷食、追到门边又滑溜进洞,这画面感令人惊喜!动词用得活,就是“very lazy”“so yummy”这类英文直译有点跳戏,下次试试“懒洋洋”“香喷喷”。

look and say 看一看,说一说

200字
主题:快乐、自然、成长、童趣、阳光、运动

英语叙述:look at this picture ! its sunny day ,the fleecy clouding in the sky , a big tree in the grass , three children are flying kite ,they are happy! look tall sky , a bird flying . some children are play football. its a good time!

中文翻译:看这张图片!它是一个晴朗的一天,许多的云在天空上飘着,一棵大树屹立在草地上,三个孩子在放风筝,他们很开心!看这高高的天空,一只鸟正在飞翔。一些孩子在踢足球。这是美好的时光!

精选读者点评

云“fleecy”译成“许多的云”,可惜了,这词多像棉花糖啊!

poisonous snakes 毒蛇

200字
主题:亲子对话、动物拟人、语言幽默、认知反差、成长趣思

a father and son snake are out for a nice afternoon slither. the son asks, dad,are we poisonous snakes? the father replies proudly, yes son, we are rattler snakes! why do you ask son? ecause dad, i just bit my tongue!!

一个阳光明媚的下午,蛇父亲和蛇儿子出去散步。儿子问:“爸爸,我们是毒蛇吗?”父亲得意的答道:“当然了,孩子,我们是响尾蛇啊!为什么这么问呢?”“因为,我刚把舌头咬破了!”

精选读者点评

这双语小笑话真逗!中英文对照得自然,连“rattler”都译成“响尾蛇”不硬套,还保留了蛇类特征。但“slither”翻成“散步”稍软了点,试试“游荡”哦!

happy weekend快乐的周末-小学英语作文带翻译

250字
主题:童年生活、家庭亲情、语言实践、日常计划

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happy weekend

快乐的周末

hello, im ni minya. im going to have a happy weekend!

on saturday, im going to visit my uncle. he lives in a small country. when im going to visit him, i will be very happy.on sunday, im going to go shopping. i will buy many things that i like.

so this will be a happy weekend. and you?

你好,我是倪明亚。我将有一个愉快的周末!

上周六,我要去看望我的叔叔。他住在一个小国。当我去看望他,我会很happy.on星期天,我要去逛街。我会买我喜欢的东西。

因此,这将是一个快乐的周末。你呢?

精选读者点评

倪明亚同学,中英文混用挺有生活味儿!但“小国”容易让人误会成主权国家,你叔叔住的是乡下?小镇?换个词更准哦~

the final exam

450字
主题:成长体验、学业挑战、自我认知、心理调适、学习自信

yesterday, i took the final e_am of this term. i worked hard to prepare for it, but i was still nervous. i was afraid that i couldn’t do it well. i had three e_ams, chinese, math and english. in the morning, it was the chinese. it was not so difficult for me that i was sure i could be good in it. then, it was math in the afternoon. it’s the part i was afraid of most. not surprised, i met some troubles in math e_am. but i still hope they wouldn’t be serious. i am good at english, so i didn’t worry about it. i knew i can do well in it. in short, the final e_am was not so hard for me and i am quite sure the scores will be perfect.

昨天,我参加了这学期的期末考试。虽然我很努力备考,但是考前我依然很紧张,我怕自己考不好。有三门考试,分别是语文、数学和英语。第一天早上考语文,这对我来说不算难,我相信自己能考好。下午考数学,这是我最怕的一科。不出意料,考试的时候果然碰到难题了,但我希望不会错得太离谱。英语是我的强项,所以我没有担心英语科目,我知道我会有优异的表现。总的来说,期考对于我来说并不算太难,我相信自己能考出好成绩。

精选读者点评

标点用得挺规矩,中英文混用处都加了空格,这点比好多同学强!就是“e_am”写成下划线,是打字习惯还是故意的?下次试试直接拼对。

广场 the square

250字
主题:亲情、日常、温馨、代际、生活、邻里

广场 the square

there is a big square near my house. people like to get together there and have the long chat. my grandma likes to go there when she has the time. especially at night, after finishing dinner, my grandma will go to dance with her friends in the square. sometimes i will go with her, seeing my grandma dance and join her group.

我家附近有一个大广场。人们喜欢聚在那里,长时间的聊天。我奶奶一有时间就喜欢去那里。特别是在夜晚,吃完晚餐后,我奶奶会和她的朋友们一起去广场上跳舞。有时我会和她一起去,我看着奶奶跳舞,也会加入她的团队。

精选读者点评

中英文混用得挺自然,但“the square”和“long chat”这种表达,母语者其实不说,咱们写中文作文时,英语词最好全删掉,换成“广场”“闲聊”更妥。

我们应该遵守交通规则

450字
主题:规则意识、公共安全、行为规范、责任担当、社会秩序

we should follow traffic rules

我们应该遵守交通规则

in order to keep the road orderly and people safe, everyone should follow traffic rules.

为了保持交通秩序和人们的安全,人人都应该遵守交通规则。

the walkers should look carefully both left and right when they are crossing the roads. when people are driving, they should wear a seat belt. drivers are not allowed to drive after drinking. they must stop when the lights are red. many people take buses. they should wait in line, and follow the rule first get off; then get on.

行人在穿马路时,应该人真的看看左右。当人们开车时要系上安全带,酒后不能开车,见到红灯必须停下来。许多人乘公共汽车,他们应该排队,并遵守“先下后上”的原则。

if everyone follows the traffic rules, there will be fewer traffic accidents.

如果人人都能遵守交通规则,交通事故就会少多了。

词义解析:

orderly:有秩序的

2.follow:遵循

3.traffic:交通

4.rule:规则

5.walker:信任

6.carefully:仔细地

7.cross:横过

8.wear:戴

9.belt:带

10.allow:允许

11.light:灯

12.wait:等待

13.fewer:较少的

14.accident:事故

词组解析:

in order to:为了

精选读者点评

这个“walker”译成“信任”?翻词典翻串页了吧!后文写行人过马路,上下文都对不上,得重查。还有“belt”单独出现,没说清是安全带,小朋友容易误会成皮带哦。

小学英语作文—my pet 我的宠物

200字
主题:亲情、陪伴、童趣、成长、生命教育、关爱动物

i have a new pet.it is a dog.it is ming ming.it is one year old.it is very cute.it has short legs.it has big eyes and long ears.it‘s very small.it has a short tail.it likes eating bone.it likes running.sometimes it likes playing with a ball.i like my pet very much.

我有一个新的宠物。它是条狗,叫明明。它一岁大,很可爱。它有一双短腿,大大的眼睛和长长的耳朵。它很小,有一条短短的尾巴。它很喜欢吃骨头,很爱跑。有时,它喜欢玩球。我非常喜欢我的宠物。

精选读者点评

明明这名字起得真好!“明”字双关,既像狗叫“汪汪”,又暗含“明亮”“明白”的意思,你写它眼睛大、耳朵长,读着就亮晶晶的。下回试试把“它很可爱”换成一个动作?比如它怎么歪头看你,怎么追自己尾巴。

小学生英语自我介绍作文及翻译

250字
主题:热爱学校、师生关系、互助友爱、成长印记

introduce myself

hello, my name is gu siyao. my english name is hellen. i am 12 years old. i form _iouzhou e_perimental shool. i love my school. because my school is very beautiful and big .the trees are green and the sky is blue. the classes are interesting and e_citing. the teachers are not strict. and the students are very lovely. they always help each other.

翻译:

你好,我的名字是gu siyao。我的英文名字是hellen。我今年12岁。我来自西州实验学校。我爱我的学校。因为我的学校非常漂亮。树木是绿色的,天空是蓝色的。这些课程很有趣,也很令人兴奋。老师们并不严格。学生们都很可爱。他们总是互相帮助。

精选读者点评

名字拼写要注意哦,“gu siyao”首字母大写,“xizhou”不是“iouzhou”,“experimental”少了个r,还有下划线和空格得去掉。标点也悄悄改改:英文句末得有句号,别光靠空格断句啦!

我最喜欢的老师

400字
主题:师爱、才艺、亲切、美好、热爱、成长

my favorite teacher is miss huang. she is a beautiful lady. she has two big eyes, a high nose and a small red mouth. there is always a smile on her face.

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位美丽的女士。她有一双大大的眼睛,一个高高的鼻子和一个小小的红色的嘴巴。她的脸上总是带着微笑。

miss huang likes singing and collecting posters. she is good at playing the piano. in the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. she is good at dancing, too. sometimes she teaches us dancing.

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她擅长弹钢琴。傍晚的时候,她总是坐在钢琴前面弹奏优美的曲子。她还擅长跳舞。有时候,她会教我们跳舞。

miss huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. her favorite color is blue. because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

黄老师非常喜欢小狗,因为小狗很友好,很可爱。她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。因为蓝色是天空和大海的颜色。

this is my favorite teacher. our classmates all like her very much.

这就是我最喜欢的老师。我们所有的同学都很喜欢她。

精选读者点评

黄老师弹琴时的侧影,比“高鼻小嘴”生动多啦!下次试试写她教跳舞时,你踩错拍子她怎么笑呀!

my lovely teacher

200字
主题:师生情、陪伴、引导、温暖、教育

my lovely teacher

我们班有个可爱的老师,我们学生都把他当成我们的朋友,我们愿意把自己的喜怒哀乐告诉他,他不仅在学习上帮助我们,也会在其它事上指导我们,我很高兴有这样的老师。

本文译文:

there is a lovely teacher in our class. we like him as our friends. we would like to tell him everything, happiness and sadness. he helps us on our lessons and guides us on other things. i am happy to have such a good teacher.

精选读者点评

这个“lovely”用得真巧!不是光说“好”,而是让人一眼看见老师眼里的光和手心的温度。后半句英文翻译里,“happiness and sadness”太直白,试试“what makes us laugh or cry”?留点余味。

大象的小学生英语作文

300字
主题:动物特征、人象关系、自然认知、生命尊重

elephants are the biggest animals on land. they have long noses, and we call the noses trunks. elephants use their trunks to get food and put the food into their mouths. elephants have very long and strong teeth. and we call the teeth tusks.

people in some countries teach elephants how to work for man. elephants use their trunks and tusks to pull trees along and lift heavy logs.

most of the children like elephants, because they think elephants are kind and friendly.

大象是陆地上的动物。他们有长长的鼻子,我们叫鼻子鼻子。大象用它们的鼻子获取食物,把食物放进嘴里。大象有很长很结实的牙齿。我们称之为牙齿。

在一些国家的人们教大象如何为人类工作。大象用它们的树干和象牙来拉树,并举起沉重的圆木。

大多数的孩子喜欢大象,因为他们认为大象是善良和友好的。

精选读者点评

这个“鼻子鼻子”写得真可爱!然而第二段英文里trunks和tusks都译成“鼻子”“牙齿”,小朋友容易糊涂哦~下次试试给它们起个响亮的中文小名哦!

小学生我的学校生活英语作文

300字
主题:学习兴趣、自我认知、成长体验、学科态度

in my school,there are lots of students.i can play with my friends every day , that’s very good. i like studying english,but i can’t study very well. my achievement is not stabilize.i like pe. i can run very fast.本篇文章来自资料管理下载。 i nearly take part in the match of every running .this match our class won the first.i’m very happy.i don’t like studying chinese. i hate it. it’s too difficult for me .

在我的学校里有很多学生,我可以每天和我的朋友们玩,那是很好的。我喜欢学习英语,但我不能很好地学习。本篇文章来自资料管理下载。我的成就是不稳定的,我喜欢体育。我可以跑得很快。我几乎参加比赛,这场比赛我们班赢了第一,我很高兴,我不喜欢学习中文。我讨厌它。对我来说太难了。

精选读者点评

跑得快真棒!班里夺冠那句写得尤其爽快自然,要是把“赢了第一”改成“拿了冠军”,是不是更像小记者口吻?还有啊,“成就不稳”这词儿太大人腔了,换成“成绩有时高有时低”,读着就顺多了。

长城的小学生英语作文

350字
主题:世界遗产、古代工程、文化象征、民族智慧、文明交流

chinas great wall is known to the world as one of the seven great wonders of the world. it is located in north china. it is over 6000 kilometres in length and is 25 feet high in average. the ancient people started to built the wall in the 7th century bc with earth,brick and stone, and joined it in the qin dynasty. the great wall was built in ancient china to keep out invaders, however, it is now regared as one of the most important tourist spots in our country or even in the whole world. every year, it is visited by thousands of people from all over the world.

中国的长城是世界七大奇迹之一的世界。它位于中国北部。有6000多公里长,25英尺高的平均水平。古代的人们开始建造长城与地球在公元前7世纪,砖和石头,在秦朝,加入它。长城建于中国古代阻挡入侵者,然而,现在把最重要的旅游景点之一,在我们国家,甚至整个世界。每年,它是由成千上万的人参观了来自世界各地的。

精选读者点评

这句“it is now regared as one of the most important tourist spots”里,regared拼错了,少了个d;后文中文部分“与地球在公元前7世纪”明显是machine translation的痕迹,“earth”该译作“土”或“夯土”,不是“地球”啊!

可爱的小猪

250字
主题:童年礼物、观察力、快乐情感、生活趣味

mother gave me a toy pig on my tenth birthday. it was very lovely.

妈妈在我十岁生日的时候送给我一只玩具猪猪。非常可爱。

the pig wears a blue dress. her face is pink. her eyes are round and black. her mouth is small and red. her two ears are very big. they seem like two fans.

小猪穿了一条蓝色的裙子。她的脸蛋是粉红色的。她的眼睛圆圆的很黑。她的嘴巴小小的,红红的。她的耳朵很大,看起来像两面扇子。

she looks very happy, because she always smiles. so i think she must be a happy pig.

她看起来很开心,因为她一直挂着笑容。所以我认为她是一只快乐的小猪。

小作者细致入微的为大家描述了自己的玩具小猪。

精选读者点评

这只小猪活了!粉脸、黑眼、红嘴、蓝裙、大耳朵,全在你笔尖动起来了。最后那句“她一定很快乐”,真像孩子踮脚摸到云朵的语气。