i love my father very much!

100字
主题:亲情、家庭、成长、日常、热爱、陪伴

i love my father very much!

my father is a teacher. he is thin and tall. he likes eat popcorns. he is handsome! he’s favorite color is black. because he can’t cook. he have many chicken, a dog and many cat. he like listening to music. i like my father.

精选读者点评

标点呢?全篇就一个感叹号撑场面!大小写乱飞,like后面跟动词原形还是to do?popcorns是可数吗?cat为啥不加s?最后一句“i like my father”,前面不是说“love”吗?感情升级了还是降级了?

生日礼物的英语作文

350字
主题:亲情、成长、礼物、记忆、感动、陪伴

the best birthday present for me.

i have many birthday presents and the mp3 player is the best birthday present for me.

the mp3 player is the birthday present for my ninth birthday.

i still use it to play my favourite songs.

peter的文章:

i have many birthday presents and the mp3 player is the best birthday present for me.i have a lot of good presents,for e_ample:baseball gloves,sneakers,a bike and some cool toys.the most e_pensive one is the well-known brown sneakers and the biggest one is the bike.but i still like the mp3 player more than any of my other presents.

the mp3 player is the birthday present for my ninth birthday.i remember my mother told me that she forgot my birthday and didn prepare any presents for me.i was so sad and i thought she didn love me any more.but the end of the dinner,mum and dad took out a big bo_ and it was a new mp3 player.what a surprise!

i still use it to play my favourite songs.i love it so much.i will never buy a new one.no present in the world is better than it.

精选读者点评

这“mp3 player”真通透第九岁那晚的饭桌、妈妈说忘生日时你瘪嘴的样子、纸盒掀开那一瞬的光,全在句子里跳着呢。结尾“no present in the world is better than it”太用力,但正是孩子才敢这么写啊。

家乡的小学英语作文

200字
主题:乡愁、发展、留守、变迁、生存、希望

关于家乡的小学英语作文

my hometown, a village locating beside a small river, is a wonderful place with beautiful scenery surrounded. because of the poor geographical environment and without an asphalt road, the whole village is poor and people’s lives are tough. generally, people grow rice and some other crops for a living.

most young people work at the city, leaving their parents and children at home, which is the status of the vast majority of rural area. it seems that only in this way can rural people live a better life.

精选读者点评

景物描写场景直观生动感,但“a village locating beside…”这句语法不对哦,改成“located beside”试试?后半段写得有点沉重,能加个温暖的小细节吗?比如奶奶在河边洗菜时哼的歌呀!

i am cathy

250字
主题:成长、热爱、健康、勤奋、亲情、语言学习

good morning everyone

i am cathy,my famliy name is tian,my first name is ying .you can call my english name cathy. im 11 years old. i live in a small country, its name is li_ian. i am a student, im in class one grade si_, i like english,i study english in omnibrain. my english teacher is good for with us.

there are three people in my famliy. my father, mother and i, my famliy is small but happy!

i like sunmer and i don like winter. my favorite food is humbuger. my favorite color is pink and my favorie sport is badminton. sport is good for health.

i can speak chinese and a little english. i get up 6 0clock in the morning, i like reading enflish in the morning. knowledge is power, so i study very hard everyday.

thats all !

thank you !

精选读者点评

cathy同学,名字拼写要细心哦,“family”少了个“y”,“grade four”别写成“si_”,“hamburger”不是“humbuger”。客观来说你敢用英语介绍自己,真棒!

小学生写事英语作文

450字
主题:成长趣事、伙伴情谊、自然游戏、纯真时光

小学生写事英语作文

i started playing a small note, good things, bad things too numerous to mention, i will list a happy thing for everyone to see it.

once, i told my buddy _u weiming to play with the embankment. we saw a lot of pebbles in the distance, we went together in the past, put a row of pebbles thrown into the river, the game who threw far, and later we play sweat, they sat on the cobbled puff.

i found a piece of wood in the distant stone heap. i said to _u weiming: we put the board as a surfboard, how?

well, and i mean. _u weiming happy said.

i said, let me try it first!

well, thats all right. _u weiming hesitated.

so, i do a good job skateboard on the slope, after a long while also filament does not move. i had to ask for help _u: _u weiming, you kick me kick me down. so he told me to give me a kick. i hundered slipped down. that feeling really cool. the final direction did not master, planted a few big somersault, became a sand man.

i went up, down to _u weiming smile before leaning forward. i look at the ground of a pool of water, the whole big face, even my own laughter. later, when he slipped my lesson in the downhill stopped the surfboard before no old tricks. so we spent a pleasant afternoon.

this is one of my happy things, you also told me to listen to it!

精选读者点评

这个“沙人”画面清晰!摔得狼狈,笑得敞亮,整段读完我嘴角一直没下去。你把动作刻画得真鲜活,“ thundered ”滑下去、“大翻滚”“趴地上照脸”,全是孩子自己的镜头感。下次试试把“_u weiming”写成“于伟明”?名字写全,更像真事。

my teacher英语作文

250字
主题:师生关系、成长感悟、课堂趣事

my teacher英语作文

my english teacher appears very beautiful and she looks about 40 years old.she has a son.our english teacher is very strict with us,and sometimes,she is very friendly and kind to us.she is also humorous.on the april fools day,she said to us,you are going to have a holiday this afternoon.many students thought it true.many students dare not talk,because she is very strict.we are afraid that we cannot pass the e_am,because the teacher will criticise us if we don pass.she doesn give us too much homework,and she doesn give us too much pressure.sometimes,we like our engllish teacher.

i like english,and i like my english teacher.

精选读者点评

开头“very beautiful”太笼统啦!试试写她笑起来眼睛弯弯的样子?或者批作业时推眼镜的小动作?细节才打动人呀~

节日的小学生英语作文

600字
主题:家庭团聚、传统习俗、节日喜悦、文化传承、幸福期盼

关于节日的小学生英语作文

spring festival is on the first day of the first lunar month. chinese people most like the spring festival. during spring festival, chinese people like having meals with their families, playing fireworks in the open air. my sisters and i played fireworks on that day. we had many fireworks. they were very beautiful. they were running into the sky and breaking into pieces. they looked like flowers in the sky. we were very happy and e_cited. after that, i made a wish. i hope that, we can have a happy and healthy life ne_t year and everyone in my family can be happy.

i enjoy the festival very happy.

on this day, people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. after that, people always eat delicious moon cakes, and watch the moon. the moon is always very round on that day, and makes people think of their relatives and friends. it is a day of pleasure and happiness. hope you have a wonderful mid autumn festival!

篇五关于节日的小学生英语作文

thanksgiving day is one of the most important festivals in america. it’s most closely connected to the earliest history of the country. the dinner of thanksgiving day is totally a feast, because it’s a day to celebrate and give thanks to the blessing of harvest. a roast turkey is essential. it is usually stuffed with bread and vegetable to absorb the tasty juices. of course, turkey is the traditional main course. there are many other delicious dishes to celebrate this festival, such as sweet potato and pumpkin pie. this is the most important meal in a year for the americans, so it’s a time for family gathering.

精选读者点评

“we were very happy and e_cited”这句拼写漏了字母,下次写完记得默读一遍哦~还有“i enjoy the festival very happy”搭配不对,是enjoy…very much,或者i was very happy。小细节,改过来就更棒啦!

happy weekend快乐的周末-小学英语作文带翻译

250字
主题:童年生活、家庭亲情、语言实践、日常计划

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happy weekend

快乐的周末

hello, im ni minya. im going to have a happy weekend!

on saturday, im going to visit my uncle. he lives in a small country. when im going to visit him, i will be very happy.on sunday, im going to go shopping. i will buy many things that i like.

so this will be a happy weekend. and you?

你好,我是倪明亚。我将有一个愉快的周末!

上周六,我要去看望我的叔叔。他住在一个小国。当我去看望他,我会很happy.on星期天,我要去逛街。我会买我喜欢的东西。

因此,这将是一个快乐的周末。你呢?

精选读者点评

倪明亚同学,中英文混用挺有生活味儿!但“小国”容易让人误会成主权国家,你叔叔住的是乡下?小镇?换个词更准哦~

谁不礼貌who is not polite

200字
主题:人际边界、情绪管理、道德自觉、自我成长

my friends and i had a party in my house on christmas day.everyone enjoyed themselves at the party. but something unpleasant happened. i happened to find ben, my friend, reading my diary in my bedroom. at that time i was so angry that i shouted at him.

ben stood up and left my house atonce, without saying a word. after he left, i thought it was not polite to read others diary, yet it was not polite to shout at others. if i could tell him not to do that quietly, it would be better. as a young man,everyone should have good manners.

精选读者点评

这日记偷看事件写得真像你刚摔完铅笔就写的!“我气得大吼”,声音都听见了,“他一声不吭走了”,连影子都带风。后半段突然安静下来想道理,这个转折,比老师讲十遍“要宽容”都管用。

以后的生活live in the future

150字
主题:理想生活、环境保护、科技进步、教育发展、国际视野

in the future,my living place--puko will have many differences.there will be lots of people and traffics.

so,i think there will be more pollution and the weather will be hotter than todays.there will be many schools too.and probably everyone will have many pets.they might even keep robots.theyll go skating and swimming every day.and theyll probably go to america and france for vacation.because theyll have much money.

do you agree with me?

精选读者点评

puko这地名拼写要核对哦!后文“traffics”不能加s,还有“much money”该用“more money”,这些小错不改,高考会扣分的。

描写父亲的小学英语作文

350字
主题:职业精神、亲情陪伴、榜样力量、成长认同

描写父亲的小学英语作文

my father is a policeman. he is tall and strong. he looks very cool in the black police uniform. he works in the police station and he is very busy every day. he likes helping people. so he often goes everywhere by his motor cycle. when he sees the people in the trouble, he will try his best to help the people. he is a good policeman. and many people like him very much, too. they often say: mr li, you are a good policeman. we like you very much. but my father always has a point: helping people is his duty.

my father likes reading books very much. because he thinks: a good book is a good friend. so he reads books after work every day. sometimes he plays games with me. we are very happy. i like him very much, because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend.

this is my father. he is a good father. i like my father very much! my dear friends, do you have a good father, too?

精选读者点评

黑制服、摩托车、帮人解困,跃然纸上结尾那句“他总说:帮人是本分”,比直接夸“高尚”有力多啦~美中不足“the people in the trouble”得改成“people in trouble”哦,少两个the,小细节别漏哈。

my day

400字
主题:校园生活、家庭时光、时间管理、童年日常、自我表达

my day

双流实小 六年级九班 胡雯茜

hello, everyone! my name is mary. i’m twelve years old. i am a student. from monday to friday, i go to school. but at the weekends, i don’t go to school.

on schooldays, i am very busy. i usually get up at seven o’clock. then, i have to brush my teeth and wash my face. after breakfast, i go to school. school usually starts at seven forty. we always have four lessons in the morning. some students have lunch at school. in the afternoon, we usually have two lessons, but sometimes we have three lessons. school finishes at seven o’clock. after school, i have to go home quickly, because i have so much homework to do. and i always do my homework for two hours.

on the weekends, i don’t have to go to school. i always get up at nine o’clock. then i make breakfast. after breakfast i make my bed. at 10:00, i usually feed the fish. then i play games. at 12:00 i have lunch. in the afternoon, i have a chinese lesson in chengdu . oh, i am so tired. so in the evening, i don watch tv or do anythings. i go to bed very early. tomorrow, i will go to school again!

thats my day. i am a little busy, but i am very happy everyday.

指导教师:官建英

精选读者点评

哎哟,玛丽同学这“my day”写得真像日记本里刚撕下来的一页!动词时态用得挺稳,周末喂鱼、做床、上中文课,细节灵动逼真。略显“i don’t watch tv or do anythings”这里,“anythings”可没这个拼法哦~悄悄改掉,就更地道啦!

my favorite season

250字
主题:季节偏好、童年生活、家庭陪伴、户外活动

my favorite season

双流县实验小学 六年级九班 胡雯茜

there are four seasons in a year. my favorite season is summer. it is hot in summer. we always wear a shirt and shorts. all the girls can wear dresses. in summer, we have summer vacation. on vacation, we don’t go to school. we can play basketball in the morning. children play on the seesaw with friends. in summer vacation, i go swimming every day. sometimes, i climb the mountains with my parents. we usually go hiking. my mother often takes me to the beach. we always go surfing. that is so funny!

this is my favorite season-summer. how about yours?

精选读者点评

夏天写得真热闹!“爬山”“冲浪”“跷跷板”全齐了,场景感足~略显“funny”用错了哦,冲浪是fun,不是funny(那是“滑稽”)!下次试试换词哦!

my chores

200字
主题:责任、亲情、实践、快乐、独立

my chores

双流县实验小学 六年级九班 张楚颜

hi, my name is alice . i’m twelve years old. i’m a student. sometimes i do the chores.

i often do the chores on sunday. in the morning, i get up and make my bed, but sometimes i forget. so my mother helps me make my bed. then, i clean the windows, but i’m so short. so, my father helps me. and sometimes i wash the dishes. then i wash my socks and polish my shoes. sometimes i do the cooking with my mum.

i’m a little tired with the chores, but i am very happy.

精选读者点评

把做家务写得像在过家家,真可爱!“so my mother helps me”“so my father helps me”重复两次,像在悄悄撒娇,这个语气巧思惊人,留着别改。

my mother’s day

200字
主题:亲情、劳动、时间、责任、平凡、温暖

my mothers day

this woman is my mother。

my mother is a teacher。she teaches chinese。in the morning,she eats breakfast and goes to work。she goes to work by bus。she has classes with her students。she eats lunch at school。she goes home at half past five in the afternoon。then she makes the meals for her family。after dinner,she washes the dishes。at half past si_,she dances in the park。at half past eight ,she goes shopping at supermarket。she goes to bed at ten oclock。

this is my mothers day。it is very buzy。she has a good time。

精选读者点评

妈妈跳舞那段生机勃勃!“half past si_”漏了个x,改成six就完美啦~

小学生叙事英语作文

200字
主题:校园生活、学习环境、观察描写、英语表达

小学生叙事英语作文

my classroom is nice and big. there are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. there are two black boards on the walls. and there are two pictures, too. my classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. what colour are the fans ? they are blue. at the corner, there is a shelf , many books are in the shelf. i like the books very much.

this is my classroom , it is very nice. i like my classroom very much . do you have a nice classroom, too ?

精选读者点评

句子挺顺溜,数数也准!四十张桌椅、十一盏灯、十二把风扇……小数学家呀~客观来说“shelf”前少了个冠词,“a shelf”才对哦,下次写完自己读一遍,耳朵会帮你抓到小尾巴!

马戏团

150字
主题:童年、惊喜、成长、现场体验

相关年级最新信息:小学英语小学奥数一年级二年级三年级四年级五年级六年级

when i was small, i liked to watch circus show on the tv, there were many interesting things, the animals, the clown and the unique skills made me so fascinated about the circus. one day, a circus came to my hometown, i felt so e_cited, i watched the show, this was the first time for me to see the circus show in live. i felt so happy.

精选读者点评

开头那句“when i was small”真自然!倒是后面“i felt so e_cited”拼错了,少了个i,别让小马虎偷走你的分数哦~

小学英语作文我的一天

250字
主题:日常生活、成长记录、学习生活、亲子陪伴

小学英语作文我的一天

now, the new term begins. i live the life normal as before. every morning, i get up at 6:30. after washing, i eat breakfast at home. my mother always cooks delicious and nutritious breakfast for me. i usually go to school at 7:20 by bike. it only takes me ten minutes to get to the school. we have the morning reading at 7:40 and the classes begin from 8:00. i usually have chinese, math, english and other subjects. i go home at noon and have a short rest at home.

classes are over at 5:30. i usually play at school for a while and then go home. at night, i usually finish my homework and then watch tv. about 10:00, i go to bed. this is my all day.

精选读者点评

开头“now, the new term begins”很自然,像刚开学那天脱口而出的感叹!可“i live the life normal as before”语序有点小卡,试试“life goes on as usual”?后面时间线清晰,读着像踩着钟点走路,稳当。

新年的小学生英语作文

150字
主题:传统节日、家庭亲情、文化传承、新年期盼

the spring festival is the day that the families get together.

it is usually in the february. at that day, every family will paste the lucky , fire the cracker and eat the dumplings. the day before the new years first day is the new years eve, same as the christmas eve, all the families get together to have the new years dinner, wish each other, talk about the wishes about the new year. i like that day very much, what about you ?

精选读者点评

春节写得挺热闹!“贴福字”“放鞭炮”“吃饺子”三个动宾短语连着用,节奏感出来了。美中不足“the lucky”是不是少了个“charms”?下回试试把“fire the cracker”改成“set off fireworks”,更地道哦。

小学生腊八节英语作文

300字
主题:传统节日、亲情互动、文化传承、劳动体验、年味记忆

小学生腊八节英语作文

the spring festival every year eat dumplings, we have to have a bottle laba vinegar and the mother laba garlic. that is lu_uriantly green color, steady vinegar and sour garlic, would give the spring festival add thick beijing flavour of the dumplings. one day, my mother brought out already prepared garlic, let me together with her laba garlic bubble.

well put garlic break into small disc, then the same small skin open. the skin of the true not the same small strip, the strength of the small strip does not open, the strength that big will pick the same. we stripped off for a long time, and slowly i more skilled, not only peeled off the skin, will also thin lining also strip off neatly. mother to get a jar let me off with the good garlic in, and mother put vinegar into bottle, pushing the bottle of garlic after all didn .

精选读者点评

腊八蒜的绿,真饱满“lu_uriantly green”这拼写错得可爱,像孩子踮脚够窗台上的醋瓶子,歪着头,手还沾着蒜皮呢。

过新年的小学英语作文

400字
主题:团圆、喜庆、传统、欢乐、祈福、迎新

有关过新年的小学英语作文

oom boom... he sound of firecrackers, the new year!

today is the most important day of the year, the most important day of the year, the streets are full of bustling, red and red lantern buildings. every house has hung up couplet, lively!

mom and dad are preparing the new years eve dinner, and we e helping out. at night, quietly.

the dinner was very rich, the chicken and the fish. but the younger brother was so happy that he ate and ate and said, yummy, yummy, like a pig. after dinner, its time for me to be happiest, my parents give lucky money! ha-ha ~ time arrived, the spring festival evening party begins, our family is watching the wonderful program in the room, the gurgling laughter from time to time out, echoing in the room.

after the party we went to the fireworks, a flash, the colorful ball flew from all directions, some like fireflies, some like a sparkling pearl, and like a blooming flower, we all said: eautiful.

the clock struck a solemn 12. the crackling of firecrackers pierced the sky. all kinds of fireworks rise, fireworks like snowflakes, like flowers.

happy new year!

精选读者点评

写得真热闹!“boom boom…”开头如见实景,像把人一下子拽进年味里。弟弟说“yummy yummy,like a pig”这句我读出声了,笑出声,童言无忌,反而最真。美中不足“the most important day of the year”重复两遍,擦掉一个,留力气写别处的红灯笼怎么晃、饺子馅儿怎么香?

my favorite animals

250字
主题:动物之爱、生命尊重、童心纯真、守护陪伴

my favorite animals

my favorite animals are swans.they are white.they can swim very well.i think they look like a beautiful girl in a white dress.they have a pair of wings and they can also fly well.i believe they are angles from the sky.they bring us love and make us happy.they are always friendly to us.we can hurt them,because they are our friend.i love them!i like dogs,too.they are not beautiful,but they are the best friends.they keep the thieves away.dogs have the best listening and eyes.they can hear in the nosiy,see in the dark.if we are in danger,they will help us at once.and they don mind their lives.so,i love them

精选读者点评

白鹅像穿白裙子的姑娘,这个比喻真巧妙!但“angles”拼错了,是angels哦,下次写完记得翻翻词典哈。

小学生英语作文 my mother

150字
主题:亲情、母爱、成长、温暖、家庭

小学生英语作文 my mother

look! she is my mother. her name is guo _iaomei. i think this is a nice name. she is with long hair. her eyebrows are like the willows and her eyes are as shining as the sparkler. she is very beautiful. she likes white and red. everything she cooks is very delicious. she also likes watching tv. when i get a fever, she is always with me, taking care of me!

i love my mom! i believe that she love me, too!

精选读者点评

名字拼错了,“guo _iaomei”中间那个下划线是笔误吧?还有“sparkler”一般指手持烟花,形容眼睛不太妥,换成“stars”更自然。话说回来“眉毛像柳叶”这句表达真妙!

小学生优秀英语作文-i want to be a headmaster

450字
主题:教育理想、童年向往、师生关系、自然育人、快乐学习、职业梦想

i want to be a headmaster when i grow up. i think that’s a good job. my school is in the forest. it’s very beautiful. i go to work by benz at eight o’clock in the morning. the teachers in my school are kind and patient. the female teachers in my school are good looking and young. the male teachers are handsome and strong. they are all hardworking so they get good salary. the children in my school have three classes in the morning. in the afternoon, they play and pick up mushrooms or strawberries in the forest. they have no homework. they are very happy! at four o’clock in the afternoon, i go home with kinds of mushrooms and fruits in my benz. they are for my dinner.

我长大后想当一长。我认为这是一个好工作。我的学校在森林里。它非常漂亮。我在早上八点到下午去上班。我学校的老师是善良和耐心的。我校的女教师们都很好,很年轻。男老师又帅又强壮。他们都很努力,所以他们得到了很好的薪水。我学校的孩子早上有三节课。下午,他们在森林里玩耍和摘蘑菇或草莓。他们没有家庭作业。他们很高兴!下午四点,我去家里有各种蘑菇和水果在我的奔驰。他们是我的晚餐。

精选读者点评

“森林学校”这个点子内容出彩!蘑菇当晚餐、奔驰装草莓,场景感足,童心闪闪发光。可“benz”和“kind of”这类词,下次试试换成“奔驰车”“各式各类的”,读着更顺溜。

我喜爱的老师 my favourite teacher

250字
主题:师生情、学习兴趣、课堂活力

my favourite teacher

hello,my name is steven. i have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is miss li. swhe is a very good teacher.

she is very young, but her english is very good. she teaches us english every day. her class has so much fun.she sings songs with us, plays games with us. we are so happy . and we learn english well. our english are very very good.so i like her very much.

she likes reading books and playing sports. after class, miss li often plays sports with us. we are very happy. we all love her very much.

this is my favourite teacher.she is a good teacher .i like my english teacher very much. what about you?do you have a good teacher, too?

精选读者点评

句子挺多,但“very very good”“so happy”重复了三次,像在喊口号~试试换两个词?比如“进步飞快”“笑得合不拢嘴”哦!