勤劳的奶奶 my deligent grandma

600字
主题:亲情、劳动、乡土、成长、阅读、好奇

勤劳的奶奶 my deligent grandma

when i was very small, i stayed at my hometown with my grandma. she is a deligent woman, she likes to grow vegetables and takes care of all the house chores. though my parents ask her to quit these work, my grandma refuses. she takes what she does as her great joy. i understand her, because i see her smile and be satisfied with life. 在我很小的时候,我和我奶奶呆在家乡。她是一个勤劳的女人,她喜欢种植蔬菜和照料所有的家务。虽然我父母叫她放弃这些工作,但是我奶奶拒绝了。她把这些当作的乐趣。我理解她,因为我看到她的微笑和对生活很满意。

今天,我的奶奶来看望我们,因为她很想念我。我的奶奶住在一个小的村子里,她喜欢那里的生活,拒绝搬出来。她会种一些食物,她也喜欢做这些。她会时而不时地给我们带来新鲜的食物。的确,尝起来味道和市场上卖的截然不同。我很喜欢她给我们带来的菜,我很感谢她。

篇三 好看的书 the good book

i go to bookstore today, i want to find some interesting books to read. after walking around for a while, i stop in the travel books zone. i open the books, there are so many beautiful pictures. i am attracted deeply. i buy two books about introducing egypt and india. i am so curious about their culture. some day i must go there and have a look. 我今天去逛书店,想找一些有趣的书籍来读。在走了一圈后,我旅游书籍区停了下来。我打开书本,里面有很多美丽的图片。我深深地被吸引了。我买了两本书关于介绍埃及和印度的书。我很好奇他们的文化。有一天我一定要去那里看看。

精选读者点评

奶奶种的菜真香!那个“尝起来味道和市场上卖的截然不同”,写得分外实诚,像刚掐下一根黄瓜咬一口,脆、鲜、带点土味儿。后半段突然跳到书店买书,转得有点急,要是中间加半句“那天奶奶挎着青椒来,我摸着还沾露水,忽然就想……”就顺了。

我的爸爸

500字
主题:亲情、责任、榜样、成长、热爱、陪伴

hi, my name is cindy. i have a good father. i like him very much.

大家好,我叫cindy。我有一个好爸爸。我很爱他。

my father is a policeman. he works in the police station。he is tall and strong. he looks very cool in the black police uniform.

我爸爸是一名警察。他在警察局上班。他长的很高,很强壮。他穿着黑色的制服看起来很酷。

he likes helping people. he often goes everywhere by his motorcycle. when he sees people in trouble, he will try his best to help them. he is a good policeman. and many people like him very much. but my father always has a point: helping people is his duty.

他喜欢助人为乐。他经常骑着自己的摩托车到处去。每当看到别人有困难,他就会努力帮助他们。但是我爸爸的观点是:帮助别人是自己的职责。

my father likes reading books very much. because he thinks: a good book is a good friend. so he reads books after work every day.

我爸爸很喜欢看书。因为他觉得:一本好书是一个好朋友。所以他每天下班都要看说。

sometimes he plays games with me. we are very happy.

有时候他会和我一起玩游戏。我们很开心。

i like him very much, because he is not only my father, but also my good friend.

我非常爱他,因为他不仅是我的爸爸,还是我的好朋友。

小作者分别从爸爸的职业,爱好,习惯等方面,非常形象的介绍了自己的爸爸。

精选读者点评

cindy,你把爸爸写得真暖!相当是“黑制服很酷”“看书像交朋友”这两处,场景感足~但是“他长的很高”该写“长得”,别漏了“得”字哦!

什么是家人 what is family

250字
主题:家庭温暖、手足情深、爱与理解、困难中的依靠

什么是家人 what is family

i have a happy family. my parents love me so much, though my sister and i sometimes have arguments, we love each other all the time. when i meet difficulties, i will think of my parents first, i tell them about my confusion and they will help me solve them. my sister will stand by my side when i have fight with other students. this is my family and i love them.

我有一个幸福的家庭。我的父母很爱我,尽管有时我和妹妹会争吵,但是我们相亲相爱。当我遇到困难时,我会首先想到我的父母,告诉他们关于我的困惑,他们会帮助我解决问题。我妹妹会站在我身边当我和其他同学吵架时。这就是我的家人,我爱他们。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭挺有想法!但“what is family”这句放标题里,后面没呼应,像突然闯进来的客人,要不要请它坐下聊两句?

运动sport

250字
主题:热爱运动、亲子陪伴、童年生活、理想萌芽

运动sport

i like many sports. i like playing football, swimming, running, play ping pong and so on. my favorite sport is playing football. my father taught me to play. after school, i like to play football with my friends. we run on the football field, feel very happy. when i grow up, i want to be a football player.

我喜欢很多运动。我喜欢踢足球、游泳、跑步、打乒乓球等等。我最喜欢的运动是踢足球。我的爸爸教我踢的。放学后,我喜欢跟我的朋友们一起踢足球。我们在足球场上奔跑,感到很快乐。当我长大了,我想成为一名足球运动员。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺自在啊!“i like many sports”后面紧接中文“我喜欢很多运动”,像边想边写,反而透出一股子鲜活劲儿。稍显“play ping pong”该是“playing ping pong”才跟前面结构一致哦~

我的幸运日 my lucky day

250字
主题:生活小确幸、偶然惊喜、友情陪伴、日常趣味

我的幸运日 my lucky day

today, when i am going shopping with my friends, we decide to buy the product that is on sale. if we are lucky, we can gain the prize. we believe that none of us have such luck. when we pay the bill and check out the number, we are so surprised that we win the small prize. what a lucky day.

我今天和朋友逛街的时候我们打算去买打折的东西。如果幸运的话,还可以获得奖品。我们都觉得我们不会有这样的好运气。不过我们付完钱后,查看了数字,我们都惊讶了,因为我们得了一个小奖。好幸运的一天啊。

精选读者点评

英文部分时态乱了,“am going”该用“went”,“decide”也得改过去式;中文“我们打算去买打折的东西”太口语,换成“相中了几件打折商品”就活了!

给老师的一封信 a letter to teancher

400字
主题:师恩、蜕变、信任、努力、希望、教育

dear miss liang,

i am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. with your help, i make great progress in my study. a year ago, my study was bad and i didn’t want to learn, but you never give me up. you told me that i was clever. as long as i work hard, i would be great. in this year, you cared much about my study and helped me a lot. when i made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me to correct. now, my study is much better than before, and i want to e_press my gratitude to you. hope you everything goes well.

sincerely yours,

lily

亲爱的梁老师:

您好!我写信是想要感谢你为我做出的努力。在你的帮助下,我在学习上取得了很大的进步。一年前,我的学习成绩很差,我不想再学习了,但是你从来没有放弃我。你告诉我我很聪明。只要努力,我一定很棒。近年,你很关心我的学习,帮了我很多。当我犯错的时候,你总是指出错误并帮我更正。现在,我的学习比以前好多了,我想向你表达我的感激。祝您一切顺利。

李丽

精选读者点评

这封信写得真暖!“你告诉我我很聪明”这句,读着鼻子一酸,孩子心里记着呢,老师的话真能长成光。

中国的食物 chinese food

250字
主题:饮食文化、家乡味道、民族自豪、日常热爱

中国的食物 chinese food

there is no doubt that chinese food is very popular around the world, foreign people speak highly of it. i like to eat spicy food so much. every time when i go out for meal, i will add some peppers, it makes me feel good. sichuang food is my favorite, especially the hot pot. i will eat hot pot every week. it is so lucky that i am a chinese.

毫无疑问,中国的食物在全世界都很受欢迎,外国人给予了高度的评价。我很喜欢吃辣的食物。每次我外出用餐,我会加一些辣椒,这让我觉得好吃。四川食物是我最喜欢的,特别是火锅。我每周都吃火锅。很幸运自己是个中国人。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混用得挺自然,像平时聊天说话一样,但要注意“chinese food”首字母该大写,“sichuang”拼错了哦~还有“it makes me feel good”直译成“这让我觉得好吃”不太准,换成“更是过瘾”更传神!

an unpleasant thing-一件不愉快的事

200字
主题:文明礼让、代际相处、公德意识、日常观察

上周日在公园里我看见一件不愉快的事。一个年轻人躺在公园椅上睡觉,有两位老人散步累了,想在椅子上休息。但年轻人一直睡在那儿,两位老人只好走开了。

an unpleasant thing

last sunday i saw an unpleasant thing in the park. a young man slept on a bench in the park. at that time two old men taking a walk in the park were tired and wanted to have a rest on the bench. but the young man slept there all the time. the men had to go away.

精选读者点评

这个“不愉快”写得真老实!老人走开那句,像轻轻叹了一口气,比直接骂年轻人强多了。

小学英语作文

250字
主题:观察、理解、信任、成长、温情、平凡之美

我发现了什么 what i have found

there is an strange old man who lives near my house. he doesn’t talk much and likes to hang around in the living zone. one day, i saw he searching for something and i was very curious to ask him. he said he was looking for the key. the ne_t day, a boy came to thank the old man for helping him find the key. i find the old man is a nice person.

我隔壁住着一个奇怪的老人。他话不多,喜欢在小区里闲逛。有一天,我看到他在寻东西,我很好奇,就问他了。他说他在找钥匙。第二天,一个男孩来感谢老人帮他找到钥匙。我发现那位老人原来是个好人。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺自然!“strange old man”写成“奇怪的老人”很准,但“ne_t day”漏了a,下次拼写再盯紧点~后半段中文里“寻东西”不如说“找东西”,更顺口。结尾“原来是个好人”稍显平淡,要是加句他弯腰时白头发在阳光下闪的样子,就活了!

小学元宵节英语作文

200字
主题:亲情、传统节日、家庭团聚、文化传承

festival of lanterns.i spent the festival of lanterns with my grandparents this year.

my family went to my grandparents home and had dinner with them.we had lots of sweetdumplins.after the dinner, my grandparents and i went out to play fireworks.

we had a very good time together.

我今年元宵节是和我姥姥姥爷过的。 我爸爸妈妈和我都去了姥姥家,和他们一起吃了晚餐。我们吃了很多元宵。晚餐过后,我们一起出去放花。我们在一起过得很愉快。

精选读者点评

元宵节放花那段写得表达清爽!“嘭,哗!”要是能听见声音就好了。

我的幸运颜色 my lucky color

250字
主题:色彩心理、个人偏好、生活观察、幸运象征

我的幸运颜色 my lucky color

my favorite color is red. on the one hand, when i put in the red color, my skin look white, then everybody envies me. on the other hand, red is my lucky color. when i put in it, there always happens something good to me, such as good result on the e_am or some discounts. red makes me full of energy and i like it.

我最喜欢的颜色是红色的。一是因为我穿上红色的衣服时,我的皮肤看起来会比较显白,这样大家都会羡慕我。其次是红色是我的幸运色,每次我穿上红色衣服时,都会有一些好事发生在我身上,比如在考试中获得好成绩,或者一些折扣。红色使我充满活力,我喜欢它。

精选读者点评

红衣服显白?这观察挺细!唯独“ everybody envies me”有点夸张啦~下次试试写一个具体被羡慕的小场景?比如同桌盯着你新裙子多看了三秒吧!

元宵节

200字
主题:亲情、传统、节日、欢聚、家庭

festival of lanterns.i spent the festival of lanterns with my grandparents this year.

my family went to my grandparents‘ home and had dinner with them.we had lots of sweetdumplins.after the dinner, my grandparents and i went out to play fireworks.

we had a very good time together.

我今年元宵节是和我姥姥姥爷过的。 我爸爸妈妈和我都去了姥姥家,和他们一起吃了晚餐。我们吃了很多元宵。晚餐过后,我们一起出去放花。我们在一起过得很愉快。

精选读者点评

元宵节放花那段条理清楚!“火光映在姥爷眼角的皱纹里”,这句藏哪儿了?快翻出来!

special holiday

500字
主题:家庭温暖、童年趣味、亲子互动、平凡幸福

海盐县实验小学教育集团601班 林蓝

i had a fun and special holiday。on monday,i did my homework and read some interesting story-books。tuesday morning,i went to a big nice supermarket。i bought a lot of food。then i ate them。oh,they were yummy!in the afternoon,i played ping-pong with my father。 i won the match。i was so happy。wednesday morning,i played chess with my mother。my mother won the game。but i was not sad。because it was only a game。we played,we had fun。wednesday evening,i watched tv with my parents。my parents are always busy。they have no time to play with me。but that night we were very close,very happy!

i love this special holiday!

我有一个饶有趣味并且特殊的假期。在星期一,我做了回家作业,还读了一些有趣的故事书。星期二的早晨,我去了一个又大又漂亮的超市。我买了很多食物,接着我吃掉了它们。哦,它们真美味!下午,我与爸爸打起了乒乓。我战胜了他。我非常开心。星期三早上,我和我妈妈下棋,我妈妈赢了比赛,但是我不伤心,因为它只是一个游戏。我们在游戏中获得了乐趣。星期三晚上,我和我的父母一起看电视。他们总是很忙。他们没有时间陪我玩。但是那个晚上我们很亲密,非常高兴!

精选读者点评

林蓝同学,英语句子写得挺顺溜!“i won the match”“we played,we had fun”这种短句节奏感真好,像小鼓点一样。客观来说中文部分“吃掉了它们”有点怪,食物是“吃”不是“掉”,悄悄改个字更自然哦。

参观教堂 visit the church

250字
主题:亲情、信仰、成长、宁静、文化观察

参观教堂 visit the church

my grandma believes in jesus, so she goes church every week. as i grow up, my grandma takes me to the church with her. the building is so special and a large statue in front of the house. the big cross is the obvious symbol. so many people gether in the church, they pray together. i feel the peace here.

我奶奶相信耶稣,所以她每周都去做礼拜。当我长大了,奶奶带我去教堂。建筑是如此的特别,一个大雕像在房子前面。十字架是最明显的象征。许多人聚集在教堂里,他们一起祷告。我感受到了这里的和平。

精选读者点评

奶奶带去的教堂,写得真暖!“大雕像”“大十字架”“一起祷告”,画面一下就立住了。但是“the building is so special”翻成“建筑是如此的分外”有点生硬,试试“那房子真不一样”?读着更像孩子嘴里的话。

快乐的时刻 the happy moment

250字
主题:友情、童年、生活片段、简单幸福、校园日常

快乐的时刻 the happy moment

today, when the class is over, my friends and i don’t go home and we decide to eat outside. we choose a restaurant that is buffet. we are attracted by all kinds of food, we can choose food according to our taste. it is such a happy moment, and we eat and talk a lot.then we go home after finishing the food.

今天下课后,我和我的朋友们不回家,打算在外面吃。我们选了一个自助餐厅。我们被各种各样的食物吸引了。可以根据我们自己的口味去选择食物。这是一个快乐的时刻,我们一边吃,一边聊天。吃完饭后,我们就回家了。

精选读者点评

中英混排挺有生活味儿!但“we are attracted by……”这句读着像在翻译说明书,试试换成“一进门就眼睛发亮”哦!

我喜欢的动物小学英语作文

300字
主题:动物观察、生命尊重、双语表达、自然认知

我喜欢的动物小学英语作文

cats are cute animals,they are very special as well.

it has pointy ears, round eyes,little claws,and short but soft fur.cats like eating fish and mice.they like to keep themselves clean, they do that by licking their fur.also they are nocturnal animals, they sleep in the daytime and do most of their movements at night.

we should love cat, because cats are our friends,too.

猫是可爱的动物,它们也很奇特.

它有尖尖的耳朵,圆圆的眼睛,小小的爪子和短而软的毛.猫喜欢吃鱼和老鼠.它们喜欢让它们自己保持干净,它们靠舔它们的毛这样作.同样,它们也是夜里出行的动物,它们在白天睡觉并且大多数活动是在夜间进行.

我们应当爱护猫,因为猫也是我们的朋友。

精选读者点评

猫的“舔毛”细处见功连动作带目的都清楚,比光说“爱干净”强多啦~但是“pointy ears”翻译成“尖尖的耳朵”稍硬,试试“像小三角”的呀!

在公交车上on the bus

200字
主题:文明礼让、关爱他人、日常善举、成长体验

在公交车上on the bus

i go to school by bus. there are many people on the bus. some of them are old, some of them are smaller than me, and some of them are mothers with a baby. when i see them, i will let them sit on my seat. they will thank me. feel so happy, because i help people on the bus.

我乘公交车上学。车上有很多人。有些是老人,有些比我还小,有些是带着宝宝的妈妈。当我看到他们,我会给他们让座。他们会感谢我。我感到非常高兴,因为我在公交车上帮助了别人。

精选读者点评

这句“some of them are smaller than me”真可爱!孩子气的表达反而最打动人,比“children”有生活气了。后面中文写“比我还小”,也留着这股子稚气吧,别急着改成“幼童”。

简单小学英语作文-我的朋友 my friend

250字
主题:榜样力量、同伴影响、自我成长、青春理想、语言学习

i have many friends. one of them is my classmate ma hua.he is a league member and one of the best students in my class.he is fond of english and good at it. he often practises reading aloud. so he has a good pronunciation.

he is always ready to help others. with his help i have made great progress. i have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the league in the near future.

我有很多朋友。我的同学是我的同学,他是我班秀的学生之一,他喜欢英语,擅长英语。他经常练习朗读。所以他有一个很好的发音。

他总是乐于助人。在他的帮助下,我取得了很大的进步。我已决心要赶上他,并在不久的将来参加联赛。

精选读者点评

这个“league member”写得真自然!但后面“联赛”是不是该改成“共青团”?孩子,你心里那个组织名字,得用中文全称才庄重呀~

小学英语作文带翻译-小男孩的礼物

250字
主题:亲情、孝心、懂事、温暖、回报、平凡中的感动

jack is seven years old. he lives in an ordinary family, unlike other child, he is much mature and knows to be grateful to his parents. jack always wants to give his mother a surprise, because he knows his mother has done so much for the family. so he buys a flower and send to his mother. the mother is so moved and feel very happy.

杰克是个七岁的孩子。他生在一个普通的家庭,不像其他孩子,他更成熟,知道感激他的父母。杰克总是想给他妈妈一个惊喜,因为他知道他的母亲为这个家庭付出了很多。所以他买了花,送给他的母亲。母亲很感动,也觉得很高兴。

精选读者点评

才七岁,就惦记着给妈妈买花?真暖!话说回来“send to his mother”得改成“sends it to her”,动词时态和代词别漏了哦~

我的大日子 my big day

250字
主题:成长、入学、适应、友情

我的大日子 my big day

today is a big day for me, because this is my first day to go to primary school. i am so e_cited but also nervous. when my parents drive me to school and then leave, i am scared, but when i see my classmates, we know each other soon and have a good time. i have made many friends, i love to go to school.

对我来说今天是重要的一天,因为这是我第一天上小学。我很兴奋但也很紧张。当我的父母送我去学校,然后离开时,我感到害怕,但当我看到我的同学,我们很快就了解彼此,度过了美好的时光。我交到了很多朋友,喜欢上学。

精选读者点评

这句“i am so e_cited but also nervous”真有味把拼音和英文混着用,反而透出孩子手心冒汗的真实劲儿,别改,留着。

我能照顾自己 i can take care of myself

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主题:自我成长、家庭责任、童年体验、生活能力

我能照顾自己 i can take care of myself

last night, my parents told me that they needed to go out for work at night, so they couldn’t cook for me, they asked me to live with my grandparents. thinking about staying at home alone, i felt e_cited, i told them i could take care of myself. when the darkness came, i felt hungry, i cooked the simple dinner, what’s more, i washed the dishes. i can take care of myself.

昨晚,我的父母告诉我他们晚上需要外出工作,因此他们无法给我煮晚餐,叫我去和外公外婆一起住。一想到能够独自在家呆着,我就很兴奋,我告诉他们我能自己照顾自己。夜晚来临了,我很饿,煮了一顿简单的晚饭,而且,我也洗了碗碟。我也能照顾自己。

精选读者点评

“excited”拼成“e_cited”,还知道加下划线,真可爱!后半段中英文混着来,像在悄悄练双语日记,千万下次试试全中文写,把“洗碗”那句再添点声音或水花哦!

我喜欢喝茶i like drinking tea

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主题:亲情传承、健康生活、语言学习、习惯养成

我喜欢喝茶i like drinking tea

before i was five years old, i lived with my grandparents. my grandpa likes drinking tea so much, he drinks the tea every day. so i am effected by him, i like drinking tea, too. drinking tea makes me stay healthy for i take in a lot of water. according to the healthy research, tea is good for people’s health. so drinking tea is the good habit.

在我五岁以前,和祖父母住在一起。我的爷爷很喜欢喝茶,他每天都要喝茶。因此我受到了他的影响,我也喜欢喝茶。喝茶让我保持健康,因为我喝了很多水。根据健康调查,茶有益了人们的健康。因此喝茶是好习惯。

精选读者点评

中英混搭挺有生活味儿!但“i am effected by him”该是“affected”啦~爷爷泡茶的样子,写成画面就更打动人了。

飞得更高fly higher

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主题:亲子关系、自我成长、爱的边界、童年觉醒

飞得更高fly higher

my mother takes care of me all the time, i am very thankful for her protection. but sometimes i feel like that i need to grow up and i want to do the things by my own. my mother worries about me and she will ask me do as she says. i think it is time to let go of me, i want to fly higher and be a great kid.

我的妈妈总是一直照顾着我,我很感谢她对我的保护。但是有时候,我觉得自己需要长大,想要自己做事情。我的妈妈很担心我,她会要求我按照她说的去做。我觉得是时候对我放手了,我想要飞得更高,成为一个优秀的孩子。

精选读者点评

中英混搭挺有想法!但“fly higher”和后文没勾连上,像贴了个英文标签。建议把这句真当线索用,比如写一次你硬着头皮自己搭积木塔、它倒了三次你又扶起来,最后妈妈在门口悄悄笑……那才叫“飞更高”。

我的新衣服 my new dress

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主题:成长期待、亲子约定、自我肯定、新年仪式感

我的新衣服 my new dress

my mother will buy me new clothes in the new year, which means the new beginning of the year. i am so e_cited about this present and my parents have rules for me. if i act politely all the year round, they will award me with more e_pensive dress. this year, i get one and i am so proud of myself.

我的妈妈会在新年里给我买衣服,这意味着新的开始。对于这个礼物我很兴奋,不过要得到这个礼物爸爸妈妈是有条件的。如果我在一年里都表现得有礼貌,他们就会奖励给我更贵的衣服。今年,我得到了一件昂贵的裙子,我很为自己感到骄傲。

精选读者点评

中英混搭得挺自在啊!“e_cited”“e_pensive”故意留空?是考老师拼写还是自己手滑?后半段中文写得亮晶晶的,“很为自己感到骄傲”这句,眼睛一热,真有光。

我幸运的一天 my lucky day

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主题:亲情、友情、传统、成长、喜悦、团圆

我幸运的一天 my lucky day

today, i wake up early in the morning, because it is the new year’s day, when i go out and say hello to the eldership, they will give me the lucky money, i have receive a lot of lucky money. what’s more, when i go to the street, i happen to meet my old friends, we have lost touched for many years, it is a surprise for me.

今天,我早早就起来了,因为今天是新年的第一天,在我走出去的时候,我对长辈打招呼,他们就会给我利是钱,我已经收到了很多利是钱。而且,在我走上街的时候,偶然间遇到了我的老朋友,我们已经很多年没有联系了,这对我来说真是个惊喜。

精选读者点评

开头英文标题和中文混着来,挺有生活气!但“eldership”用错了,是“elders”哦~还有“have receive”要改成“have received”,动词过去分词别漏了。利是钱行文畅快,读着就喜庆!