this is me

200字
主题:成长、个性、热爱、友善、学习、生活

hi!i am a happy and quiet girl.i am from chin.i am twelve years old,i am a pupil,i am in class three gread four.i many good friends.i like many pet,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.i am tall ,i have around face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.i have a black long hair.i like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and...i like music sing run pinting...i often saying: book is my good frieng,i like it!whate am i?yes,my name is lv enhui.

do you like me?

精选读者点评

句子太碎啦!“i am…”连着七八个,读着喘可气~试试把“我十二岁,上四年级三班,有个圆脸、大眼睛、小鼻子”揉成一句话!

my daily life

300字
主题:规律生活、自主学习、课余活动、时间管理、成长记录

i get up at si_ every day. i dress myself quickly and have breakfast at half past si_. after breakfast i go to school.

i have four lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. i study hard and always help my classmate with their lessons. i have lunch at school. school is over at five.

after supper i read newspapers or watch tv for half an hour. i prepare my lessons between half past seven and nine. igo to bed at nine.

the above is a brief account of my daily life on weekdays.there is no school on sundays. i usually review my lessons in the morning and call on some friends or to go to see a film in the afternoon.

注释:

1) dress myself穿衣

2) the above上面所说

3) a brief account简要的说明

4) on weekdays在星期日以外的各天

5) there is no school on sundays.星期天没有课。

6) call on拜访

精选读者点评

动词时态全用一般现在时,主谓一致基本稳,但“si_”明显是“six”的拼写失误,早餐时间、上学时间这些关键信息可不能马虎呀!还有“classmate”该用复数才对哦~

自我介绍

300字
主题:成长、身份认同、校园生活、家庭温暖、语言学习

this is me

hi! my chinese name is ma fangyu. my english name is jane. i’m a happy girl. i live in nanzhuang cun. my birthday is in december. my favorite colour is purple. my favorite pet is lovely dog. i have two big black eyes. i like english very much. every day i go to school on foot. i like my school. there are 25 students in my class. i love my school. this is me.

参考翻译

自我介绍

你好!~我的中文名字是马方宇。我的英文名字是简。我是一个快乐的女孩。我居住在南庄村。我的生日是在十二月。我最喜欢的颜色是紫色。我最喜欢的宠物是可爱的小狗。我有两只又大又黑的眼睛。我非常喜欢英语。我每天都步行去学校。我喜欢我的学校。有25名学生在我班。我爱我的学校。这就是我。

精选读者点评

名字写得真工整!“马方宇”三个字一笔一画,像小松树站得直。可“nanzhuang cun”建议加个连字符,nan-zhuang cun,读起来更顺,也更像英文地名啦。

妇女节英语作文范文

300字
主题:爱的表达、节日仪式感、代际互动、生活趣味

妇女节英语作文三八妇女节

today is march 8th--international womens day.father wanted to please mother and let her have a good rest. he said he would cook the meals today. in fact, he is always busy with his work and knows nothing about housework. he seldom cooks. if no one cooks for him, he will eat nothing

so mother and i were very surprised to hear what he said. but father was serious, and he said he was going to do some shopping first. he didn know what to buy. so mother wrote all the things on a piece of paper

cake 2.egg 3.tomato 4.fish

5.milk 6.salt 7.chicken

then father went out. half an hour later he came back, with a smile on his face. he brought out all the things: one cake ,two eggs,three tomatoes, four fish, five bottles of milk, si_ bags of salt and seven fat chickens!

mother was geatly surprised. she couldn say a word.

妇女节英语作文

精选读者点评

这个“四鱼五奶六盐七鸡”的清单层次分明!爸爸那股子认真劲儿,笨拙又暖人,比写对所有语法都打动人。结尾“mother was geatly surprised”拼错了,但错得可爱,像孩子踮脚够高处的糖罐子。