初中父亲节的英语作文

650字
主题:父爱、体面、善良、成长、希望、守护

初中父亲节的英语作文

once, when i was a teenager, my father and i were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus。 finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter。

this family made a big impression on me。 there were eight children, all probably under the age of 12。 you could tell they didnt have a lot of money。

their clothes were not e_pensive, but they were clean。 the children were well—behaved, all of them standing in line, two—by—two behind their parents, holding hands。 they were e_citedly jabbering about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night。

one could sense they had never been to the circus before。 it promised to be a highlight of their young lives。 the father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be。

the mother was holding her husbands hand, looking up at him as if to say, youre my knight in shining armor。

he was smiling and basking in pride, looking back at her as if to reply, you got that right。

the ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted。 he proudly responded, please let me buy eight childrens tickets and two adult tickets so i can take my family to the circus。

the ticket lady quoted the price。 the mans wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lip began to quiver。 the father leaned a little closer and asked, how much did you say?

the ticket lady again quoted the price。 the man didnt have enough money。

how was he supposed to turn and tell his eight kids that he didn‘t have enough money to take them to the circus? seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground。 (we were not wealthy in any sense of the word!)

精选读者点评

这个“掉钱”细节太灵了!不直给,偏让硬币自己滚过去,你爸那袖口一抖的劲儿,比写十句“父爱如山”都管用。然而“e_pensive”“e_citedly”里下划线咋来的?打字留痕啦?

初中生梦想的英语作文

700字
主题:理想、责任、成长、奉献、远方、信念

初中生有关梦想的英语作文

in my mind, an ideal is buried, and it may sound strange to me - a tourist guide, an e_cellent guide who travels around the world with tourists. he ship can not do without direction, young people can not do without ideal yes, this famous saying goes well, people can not do without ideals, for some people, it is arabian nights, but it is their own shore of the sea. perhaps it is because in 20__, china ten moving figures, the name of a cuttlefish guide, she is responsible for the spirit of tourists makes me very moved, in a car accident, the police came to the rescue, cuttlefish most serious injuries, but she let the tourists go out first, and their stay in the end, she was to endure how much pain! because of this, she delayed the best rescue time, causing his left leg was amputated. her lofty sentiments infected me and made me feel like an e_cellent tour guide like wen huazhi when i grew up. when i travel, i often see the tour guides and tourists to introduce the local customs, customs, places of interest and a long history, i do not secretly admire the heart, envy them. they are so talented and knowledgeable. so, i want to go to the other side of the ideal, i want to be a good guide for the future. 1., learn to deal with people. 2., learn a foreign language well. 3., to understand the customs of people everywhere. 4., cultivate your patience. i need a lot of effort. the teacher, i want to listen to, and will make some notes, so that their wisdom is more broad, i also read some human soil around the world on the data, not only broaden their horizons, but also to guide their future to be more solid foundation. a persons ideal month is noble, life is purer, yes, when an e_cellent guide may not be how lofty ideal, but it is my ocean shore, i can through unremitting efforts to arrive. i want to be a good guide. i want the charming scenery to throw away the tourists troubles. i want to leave my footprints in every corner of the world

精选读者点评

“文花枝”写成“cuttlefish”(墨鱼)了!翻车现场啊……但后半段写自己怎么查资料、学外语、练耐心,一笔一笔都踏实,看得出真在琢磨这事。结尾那句“想把风景变成游客的止痛药”,多灵的比喻!

锻炼的初中英语作文

250字
主题:热爱运动、成长陪伴、榜样影响、青春理想

关于锻炼的初中英语作文

football is my favorite sport.every time i play football with my classmates in the playground,we are very e_cited.

during this summer vacation,i usually play football at four o’clock in the afternoon.i usually play it with _ia haoran.he is one of my good friends.i haven’t got a football.but _ia haoran has a good one.he always plays with me and we are happy.

i watched the fifa world cup 2026 on tv in this summer vacation.my father and my mother are all football fans.they made me into a little fan.

i like the german football team,but they didn’t win the champion in the end,and i was very disappointed.

i love this game,and i hope that i can be a football star in my school.

精选读者点评

单词拼写小马虎啦!“excited”写成“e_cited”,“xia”写成“_ia”,“fifa”全大写才规范哦~还有“my father and my mother are all…”这句,用“both”更地道!

帮助父母家务初中英语作文

250字
主题:劳动教育、家庭责任、身心发展、亲子关系

帮助父母家务初中英语作文

is it good for students to do some housework.

some people think studengts need not do any housework.they think the only thing students need do is to study well. i don’t think so. it is good for students to do some housework for three reason.

firstly,to do some housework can make you independent.you can’t depend on others all your life.so,you should learn to do some housework now.

secondly, to do some housework can keep you healthy and strong ,some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical e_ercise.

finally, to do some housework can share your parents’ work .they must be happy if you say” have a rest ,and i will do the housework”

so i think it is good for students to do some housework.

精选读者点评

开头问句挺有想法!但“studengts”拼错了,“e_ercise”少了个r,别小看这些小窟窿,漏多了文章就漏风啦。

名胜古迹初中英语作文

200字
主题:文化体验、旅行学习、家国情怀、成长感悟

名胜古迹初中英语作文

in the summer holiday, i will visit some places of interest in southern china. by visiting these places i can learn a lo in the summer holiday, i will visit some places of interest in southern china.

by visiting these places i can learn a lot about our brilliant national culture. i will visit the suzhou gardens, the west lake, lu _uns former residence and so on. i think i can broaden my horizon of our countrys culture during the holiday. it is very helpful and interesting.

精选读者点评

苏州园林、西湖、鲁迅故居,这三处选得真巧!文化味儿足,还带点江南水汽。但“learn a lo”漏了个t,后面又重复了半句,读着像急着赶火车没写完似的。

初中优秀英语作文范文

250字
主题:亲子沟通、学业压力、自我表达、心理健康

初中优秀英语作文范文

hello, boys and girls!

pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. students in our class are under too much pressure. some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their e_ams.

i’m always under pressure, too. my parents want me to be the top student in class. so they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. last monday evening, i had a talk with my mother. i told her i was not lazy. i really felt tired. i needed time to rela_. my mother agreed with me at last. so i think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

that’s all. thank you!

精选读者点评

开头打招呼很自然!“hello, boys and girls!”像真在班里发言,有现场感。只是后面几处拼写小马虎:“e_ams”“rela_”漏了字母,读着卡顿,顺手补全就更稳啦。

my school life

200字
主题:成长、学习、快乐、友谊、活力、日常

我的校园生活英语作文

hello! i am yulan, a sunshine girl! i’m a student in class two grade seven. my school lifeis so wonderful! classes begin at 8:10 a.m. i have four classes in the morning and three classes in thafternoon. my favorite subject is math, because it ’s easy and interesting! do you like math,can you tell me? i usually have lunch at school, then, i have rest. after school, i often climb hills with my classmates on the playground. it,’s my favorite outdoor activities i like it very much! what do you think?

精选读者点评

标点乱跑啦!“it,’s”“thafternoon”“do you like math,can you tell me?”,逗号句号都迷路了,英语作文里可不能让它们集体逃学啊!

保持乐观的初中英语作文

550字
主题:积极态度、心灵映照、生活哲思、自我塑造、内在力量

保持乐观的初中英语作文

life is a mirror. if we smile to her, she would also return the happiness to us. but if we cry, she would be disappointed. therefore, we should be positive toward life, so as to get happiness.

生活就是一面镜子。如果我们对她微笑,她也会回报我们幸福。但如果我们哭泣,她会很失望。因此,我们应该积极的态度对待生活,从而得到幸福。

actually, happiness is everywhere if we keep a good attitude. as we keep a good mood, our world will be a sunny land, which is resounded with soft music. however, if we are pessimists, well find our world is full of darkness.

其实,如果我们保持良好的心态幸福无处不在。如果我们保持一个好心情,我们的世界将是一个充满阳光的地方,充满了柔和的音乐。然而,如果我们是悲观主义者,我们会发现我们的世界充满了黑暗。

while on the other side, happiness is not a destination but a journey. because theres no paradise at all, but we can make a paradise if we e hard-working and intelligent. so we should work like we don need money, smile like weve never been hurt, and perform ourselves like no one can see us.

而另一方面,幸福不是目的地,而是一段旅程。因为根本就没有天堂,但如果我们勤劳有智慧,我们可以自己弄一个天堂。所以我们应该就像我们不需要钱一样工作,就像从未受伤过一样微笑,就像没有人能看到我们一样表演。

精选读者点评

这个“生活是镜子”的比喻用得真巧!后半段“阳光地 柔音乐”的画面感也出来了,读着心里一亮。但“她会失望”这句拟人有点跳,镜子可不会失望呀,试试换成“她就照不出笑脸”啊!

an unusual experience

200字
主题:互助、勇敢、意外、成长

one day, i went to ski with my friend,li mei.we were playing happily on the ice when i heard a shout “help”.i turned back and was surprised to see a boy falling into a ice hole.but neither of us could swim.so li mei and i ran to ask for help.a few minutes later,a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. what an unusual e_perience it was!

注释:

1)we were playing happily on the ice when i heard a shout,help.我们玩得正高兴,突然听到有人高喊“救命”。

2) neither of us could swim.我们俩人谁也不会游泳。

3) ask for help求救

精选读者点评

开头时态乱了,“one day, i went”后面突然跳到“we were playing”,像电影卡帧!还有“a ice hole”得改“an ice hole”,元音开头用an,这个坑你踩过不止一次啦。

树的重要性初中英语作文

250字
主题:环境保护、人与自然、可持续发展、生态平衡

树的重要性初中英语作文

hundreds of millions of years ago, the earths animals go when the plant has a lush, full of vibrant, full of green, but the iq is much higher than other animals, humans appear, by magic plant as a sharp decrease. that is because human beings to build houses, caused by the felling of trees. either because of business needs, a large number of trees felled leaving a large number of open space, used to build the building. because many people without felling trees and trees, so the destruction of nature.

i hope everyone can protect the forest, protection of trees, so that the citys life add in green!

精选读者点评

树写得挺的确,知道砍树会留空地、建房子,这个因果抓得准!但“iq is much higher than other animals”这句老师读着直挠头,人比动物聪明,跟树有啥关系?下回试试换个说法啊!

初中英语议论作文范文

200字
主题:幸福感受、人际温暖、自我成长、生活美好

初中英语议论作文

i often feel happy. there are many things that make me happy. for e_ample,when i get presents i feel happy. it can make me feel that the people around me are friendly to me. when i help others i feel happy. because helping others is helping myself. i’m happy every day. this kind of feeling is good for me. it can make me feel that the world is so beautiful. in the future,i want to be a happy girl. do you have the same feeling as me?

精选读者点评

句子挺顺溜,读着像说话一样自然!“帮别人就是帮自己”这句说得表达清爽,比课本上那些大道理还触动心弦。美中不足“happy”出现太多次啦,试试换换花样?比如“心里像灌了蜜”“嘴角忍不住往上翘”……

意外的初中英语作文

400字
主题:勇敢、善良、责任、成长、助人、温暖

有关意外的初中英语作文

an accident

意外

one sunny afternoon, when i was merrily riding home, i heard help! help!.

一个晴朗的午后,当我高兴地骑车回家时,我听到(有人喊)“救命!救命!”。

i rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. i jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. the boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. i asked him where his home was and sent him home.

我(赶紧)骑到河边,发现一个大约5岁的男孩在河里挣扎。我(马上)跳进水里,游向男孩,并把他拖到岸边。男孩说他(刚刚)是在河边试着抓鱼,(后来),一不小心就掉进水里了。我要到了他家地址,并送他回家。

hank you very much! the boys parents said, when i left his home. though i got home late that afternoon, i was very happy.

一当我要离开他们家的时候,那个男孩的父母说:“非常谢谢你!”尽管在那个下午,我回家晚了,但我还是很开心的。

精选读者点评

这个“help! help!”写得真灵动,像从耳朵里钻进来的,后头所有动作都跟着它跑起来了!略显“merrily”译成“高兴地”稍平,试试“哼着歌”“甩着车把”。

感恩父母的初中英语作文

500字
主题:孝心、反哺、爱与责任、生命传承、家庭温暖

感恩父母的初中英语作文

since we were born, many people help us a lot. we should be grateful to their kindness. but the ones we should show our greatest appreciation are our parents. from the first day we appear in their lives, they give us all their love and care, but never e_pect anything in return. as long as they are there, we do not feel any difficulties, because they are always in front of our shelter, preventing us from difficulties and danger. in order to make our lives better, learn better, they do everything they can to create the best conditions for us, but ignore their own needs. therefore, we need to cherish parents’ love and repay their upbringing. we should treat them as they treat us.

从我们出生的那天开始,许多人都帮助过我们。我们应该感谢他们的友好。但是,我们最应该感谢的人是我们的父母。从我们出现在他们生活中的那天开始,他们不求回报地给了我们所有的爱和关怀。只要有他们在,我们感觉不到任何的困难,因为他们总在我们的前方为我们遮风挡雨,把我们挡在困难和危险的后面。为了让我们生活得更好,学习得更好,他们竭尽所能得为我们创造的条件,却忽略了自己的需要。因此,我们要珍惜父母的深情,要报答父母的养育之恩,要如他们对待我们这般来回报父母。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文对照写得挺用心!但“e_pect”漏了个x,下次检查拼写时多瞄两眼哈~